|Reviews for Star Dawning|
| The Eyes Of Death chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
ok i love outlaw star ( and suzuka is the best not gene but gene is alright) and this sound like it might be a good story 8D
| merc chapter 4 . 8/16/2003
i loved to story and if you want a name i have one called Tear. yes sounds sad bbut i like her. if you want to use her all i ask is you say that the name came from Janine and/or merc. great jib keep writing
| Seric chapter 4 . 7/29/2003
You sadistic bitch how can you be so cruel id threaten to hunt you down *evil glare* but i reserve that kind of anger for when people r mean to aisha so i am dispacting the litle blue monkeys (dont go near your toilet) then we shall see who laughs evil no not me the monkey king he needs a new slave hell teach u what mean is.
| Omega Xero chapter 4 . 1/24/2003
You, you! GODDAMNIT I HATE STUFF LIKE THIS! sequal better be good or I am gonna git extremely pissed and such! other than the overcharecterzation on jim (muscles? im not sure...) good fic
| Esquiteisha chapter 4 . 1/5/2003
Woah! OMG! That's all I can say excwpt you described it really good! *faints*
| lordbob chapter 4 . 3/15/2002
Oh my gosh I almost forgot to leave a review now that wasn't very polite of me well anyways POR JIM
ok now that that's done syonara...
| faye valentine4 chapter 4 . 2/2/2002
That was great i love melfina she's my favorite character in outlawstar and i think gene is so hot WRITEMORE please.
| Shad0cat chapter 4 . 9/13/2001
Very cute story. It sort of moved a little fast though. What I would reccomend in future stories is to give yourself time to build the relationships. Give the readers some more bonding experiences between the characters. Give the characters more reason to be in love with each other than that he or she is hot or mysteriouse.
| Kineticfairy chapter 4 . 9/8/2001
aw that's it, i can't wait for chapter 5!
| mdudette chapter 4 . 7/20/2001
aww... GREAT! more pweeze
| Taka-chan chapter 4 . 7/3/2001
beautiful! I'm off to read the sequel!
| FemaleDuoMaxwell chapter 4 . 5/27/2001
Verry good. I loved every bit of it...keep writing.
| LittleMissKD chapter 3 . 5/26/2001
OK,u have to update the sequal, I am SO waiting!
| randi brown chapter 4 . 4/12/2001
That was so saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaddd! Gene and Melfina 2gether4ever!(sobs) That was just so sad!1
| LiL PriNCeSs Me chapter 1 . 4/10/2001
good story..keep going