Reviews for You're Hurricane, You're Fire in the Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your story actually caused my heart to race at the end. I love reading fancfictions an have been for quite some time, but this is definitely a first! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this is really good! i just wish u would update! oh, for your dance u should die your hair red, and scream, "I LOVE JAMES POTTER!" at the top of your lungs! lol update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh how i do love this story. it has been a while since you updated, so can you update soon to make your readers happy? PLEASE! oh and for the R.A.D: "spin like a balerina, smack Sirius, hug Remus, Kill Peter and SMOOTCH James all while acting like a rabbit" hehe. my little bro helped me with that one. yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LURVELY LILY! lols...CANT WAIT FOR THE BALL! UPDATE SON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! It's so sweet and kawaii! My addition: scream like a chimpanzee and sing the Spongebob Squarepants theme song while hiding your head in sand |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was definitely the best, funniest, most adorable Lily/james story I'ver ever read - saying something becuase most of the others were YOUR other excellent ones. I love the way yo depicted their characters, and it is so good to see Alice and Frank included, they are such nice people and deserve to be mentioned. I just can hope that you are going to finish this and then continue with a lot of other stories, which I will know of, having just set you on Favourite authors list. I am still completely awed, and do consider to get into the Best story ever danced, which then feature some fast Samba steps out of joy. Oh, one last thing: Now that they are going to the ball, they really need to dance - make it something nice, like a Slow waltz along with a nice song...Lily so deserves to show off her nice dress, and dresses just swing best in slow waltzes...;D Long, pointless and probably confusing: hope you still like it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really LOVE your story! its really good, and james is so sweet to lily even though she is totally in denial over him... lol! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it love it love it. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm absolutely loving the story! You are one amazing author, and I can't wait to read the last two chapters. God, James is undeniably the perfect guy. Humm...that seriously makes me wish I was Lily. Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so sweet! The ending is coming...I love this fic! Update it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry I reviewed the last few chapters so I had to review this one. Are you still writing? I give you 2 weeks to update. I LOVE YOUR FIC PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE NOW! luv ya :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter eight! Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! Really good, adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! THEY ARE TOGETHER! I"M SO HAPPY! YAY! Ok, i'm done screaming now. But htis i sthe last chapter you have posted so far! *Wails* YOu have to update! YOu have too! You wouldn't want me to die in agony from waiting would you! hehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lily is being so so so so so so so (ok, i'll stop now) stupid! *sigh* i erally can't wait for them to get together. Oh, and i love how they both wre banging their heads on the table, hehe, that was funny! |