AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! O_O I'm freaked out, but...gulp...I'm going to keep reading...

Wow! I loved the story. Very dark and tragic, and the use of short, staccato sentences was really effective. The picture was wonderful, as well. Talking in technical, artistic terms, it wasn't knockout skilful (sorry there) but something about it just captured the whole spirit of the story and the colours you used were really evocative. I actually copied it with watercolour pencils, but I couldn't quite get that sketchy, delicate look right, which was what it really needed to show the panicky, wild tone of the story. I shall stop rambling now, and simply say great drawing and great fanfic. Poor Draco. *sniff*

That is one of the sweetest, most tragic thins I have ever read :( The imagery was beautiful nd I could totally feel what Draco was thinking.

Please may I use this fic as inspiration?

Lily x

its really beautiful XD

Very intriguing story. Did you base the creatures on something that already existed, or did you create them yourself?

aw! i thought this was going to be more than a one-shot! damn! i'm so disappointed now because i was really into it and found it very facinating

I like this a lot. It harkens back to how I used to feel during thunderstorms..*shiver*

I can't see the picture though. *tear*

Aw, poor Draco. he needs a hug.

I love your desciption in the story, I can just imagaine how intense that would be. You written this very well. too bad there isn't a sequel lol.

wow definitely continue to write this fic. i can't wait to see what happens next. please keep me updated!

Emma

good art pic!

OMG...This is really good! i have to continue reading! Please feel free to check out my horror fic, hp based called REVELATION!

Emma

Wow... that was absolutley exceptional... deliciously dark! You deserve an award! *hugs Draco* Poor guy... I think Draco needs a puppy... He needs a friend! GET HIM A PUPPY, DARNIT!

YOu deserve so many more reviews for this story. It is very captivating. Very dark. And very excellent. It is truely a work of art. I salute you.

-Aymie

Poor draco :( Aw I just wanna hug him...fabulous story, love it!

-Quirks

This was great! I loved it! Poor Draco... Well write more soon!.Ja ne!(later)

POOR DRACO!
I liked it.. It was beautifully dark
GaB