|Reviews for Seeing|
| Rika100 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
This is really good. I hope there is more to this story, I really like it. _
| lotus-bugxm9 chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
omg l love these 2 together! :D
| ShadowAkiyah chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Nice. Very nice. Very steamy, just for a kiss. It really worked. Thanks for sharing
| brokenangelwings16 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
you should keep going its really good
| narakunohime chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
| Secret Thought chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Lol.. hahaha it's okay, your story didn't need smut to get my imagination going. ;] Dom overpowering Bryan is all anyone really needs! :D
| WickLobo chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Nice start. You should write more of this...Please.
| Dumpster Diver chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
Stunning. Beautiful imagery, lovely characterization.
| Kerttu chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Omg, omg, omg, omg, omg!
You rock. This was so HOT that it scorches. Would you PLEASE write some more?
| Newjay chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
| Daya2 chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
Oh, wow. Totally works just fine the way it is. Sex... Sex is nice but I don't think it would be easy to mae it work in a way that could be punchier than that last line.
| Shinna chapter 1 . 11/13/2004
Can't wait to read the next chapters
| maliek chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Really like what is going on ~
Doing a great job!
Keep it up:)
| corie chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
please finish the fic "Seeing" i am a big fan of dom and brian fic. please please please please finish it. _~ _
| Priestess of Silvanus chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
one word. . . HOT