Reviews for The Twenty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was excited at the start of the story like ... 'Okay it's a female empowerment and baddass hermione ' But halfway through it was a totally different hermione. One who is not even thinking straight and there is no wand magic performed through majority of the story.:( Also I thought author would reveal other goddess who were blessed like neville, Melanie... :/ And Voldymoldy wasn't even killed before epilogue! Over all enjoyed the first half of the story, second half should have focused more on the war instead of 'finding hermione' like she clearly told them not to search her but the order waste their resources on look out for her instead of doing order's job (planning/thrawting deatheaters):/ author notes are wayyyyyyy bigger than each chapters. Even though it severely lacked in second half with no concrete ending, it was a nice read (except the angst when hermione hides alone) if no one read any reviews about the story beforehand, I'll rec it as page turner. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to stop my binge reading to tell you, that was so amazingly well done that my heart was racing and I found myself holding my breath! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Calligraphy as a wizarding art is a wonderful and very unique idea! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The idea was good, but I've found myself jaded by author notes longer than chapters and an open ending with no end, no epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() A good start, I love religion and specially this one, I hope I'll be seeing more of it and how it integrales into the plot. Your narrative needs to get a little bit more loose, the end to the chapter was a bit trite, but I'm hitting Next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Words cannot describe just how much I absolutely loved and adored the story. Thank you so so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so so soooo goodddddd |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo sad |
![]() ![]() ![]() PH WOWWW NOOOO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo good |
![]() ![]() ![]() When is Snape going to figure it out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Hermione |
![]() ![]() ![]() When will Snape figure it out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wowwww |