Reviews for The Twenty
YourVeryOwnRandomCatLady chapter 12 . 3/10
so far, I'm loving this pic. however I do have a single bone to pick with you, the author. a frozen cappuccino is an abomination of nature. by definition a cappuccino is half steamed milk, half pure milk foam, with espresso. my barista sensibilities are thoroughly offended. I am 2/10 upset mostly because the rest of the story has been so great. if you read this please don't ever write about a frozen cappuccino again. there are plenty of other acceptable Frozen espresso and milk caffeinated beverages to choose from. thank you for hearing my rant I will continue reading this fantastic story
tessita25 chapter 25 . 10/6/2023
I have read this story multiple times over many years. It's still a favorite. It's so well written, and just plays out perfectly. I've been reading HP fanfics for 18 years, and this is one of the best. Thank you for that, and hope you're doing well.
AnotherDayAboveThisEarth chapter 10 . 10/3/2023
I'm rereading. This chapter was fucking fantastic. I haven't been able to pick Bell flowers for 20 years, but I wanted to check those girls on.
Chopseuyeyelashes chapter 25 . 5/12/2023
I was excited at the start of the story like ... 'Okay it's a female empowerment and baddass hermione ' But halfway through it was a totally different hermione. One who is not even thinking straight and there is no wand magic performed through majority of the story.:(
Also I thought author would reveal other goddess who were blessed like neville, Melanie... :/ And Voldymoldy wasn't even killed before epilogue!
Over all enjoyed the first half of the story, second half should have focused more on the war instead of 'finding hermione' like she clearly told them not to search her but the order waste their resources on look out for her instead of doing order's job (planning/thrawting deatheaters):/ author notes are wayyyyyyy bigger than each chapters.
Even though it severely lacked in second half with no concrete ending, it was a nice read (except the angst when hermione hides alone) if no one read any reviews about the story beforehand, I'll rec it as page turner.
Fancy Et All chapter 15 . 1/26/2023
I have to stop my binge reading to tell you, that was so amazingly well done that my heart was racing and I found myself holding my breath!
Saissa chapter 2 . 10/26/2022
Excellent story. Calligraphy as a wizarding art is a wonderful and very unique idea!
Nut Toxx chapter 25 . 7/31/2022
The idea was good, but I've found myself jaded by author notes longer than chapters and an open ending with no end, no epilogue.
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 1 . 7/15/2022
Great story.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2022
A good start, I love religion and specially this one, I hope I'll be seeing more of it and how it integrales into the plot. Your narrative needs to get a little bit more loose, the end to the chapter was a bit trite, but I'm hitting Next
alannalove1990 chapter 25 . 7/12/2022
Words cannot describe just how much I absolutely loved and adored the story. Thank you so so much!
alannalove1990 chapter 24 . 6/16/2022
This is so so soooo goodddddd
alannalove1990 chapter 23 . 6/16/2022
Soooo sad
alannalove1990 chapter 22 . 6/16/2022
PH WOWWW NOOOO
alannalove1990 chapter 21 . 6/16/2022
Soooo good
alannalove1990 chapter 20 . 6/16/2022
When is Snape going to figure it out
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