Reviews for A royal Cage
dancing.unicorn chapter 4 . 9/21/2009
nice, wondering if you are planning to update , i sure hope you do :D
dancing.unicorn chapter 3 . 9/21/2009
nice chapter :D
dancing.unicorn chapter 2 . 9/21/2009
SWEET ! another nice chaper, i'm looking forward to reading more :)
dancing.unicorn chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Great chapter, i'm in the process of writing my own X fanfic and this was very inspiring! i wont copy (promise) , but it gave me great ideas :D
GypsyWitchBaby chapter 3 . 9/17/2009
Love the fact that you're incorporating historical facts into your story! Cool idea!
Jaxter-the-poet chapter 4 . 3/30/2006
Hey, what a fun fic! Thanks for writing it. I noticed that there are a view places where quotation marks aren't inserted and that there are double-typed letters (though I guess that might be stuttering, the formatting makes it hard to be sure). I like the human and sore Xander a lot, and Charlie's not too boring herself.
rugby-chick chapter 4 . 8/7/2005
hey ievandie!

great chappie...sorry i couldnt review earlier but my hard drive got fried. anyways, keep up the great work!

now, on to the critisim! there is not a lot wrong with this story although near the end your quotations and paragraph spacing went out the winow so to speak. i would try using microsoft word or a beta. if you take the beta route, just send me and email and i'd happily do it if you want

so, i hope to see a new chapter soon! keep it up!

pia
Quizzy chapter 4 . 5/5/2005
this is realy good, keep it up
Christiana Anderson chapter 4 . 5/4/2005
Like the story - its very different and quite amusing in places!
Emily Victoria chapter 3 . 4/15/2005
plz continue

lol

m

x
rugby-chick chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
hey great story keep it up
MoonlitDay chapter 3 . 2/21/2005
WRITE MORE! NOW! please... *workin the puppy dog eyes and the quivering bottom lip, sticking out*

luvz

Jesy
TheChimeraSculptress chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
I just wanted to thank you for all the *lovely* feedback you have given my stories! It is much appreciated!

I intend to return the favour, and read all of *your* stories, as soon as I get the time.

I feel bad not leaving you a review for anything today but I promise I will do so asap!

Greetings from the UK!

(I love how you end all your reviews!)

:)
Slone'sTravelDreamer chapter 3 . 6/8/2004
I love the story so far update soon!
Sapphire chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
Excellent story! I can;t wait toread more. Please update this soon!
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