Reviews for Brighter Morning
hotcocoalatte chapter 8 . 8/7/2005
LOve the story!
Charlie Quill chapter 15 . 7/27/2005
I especially liked how you introduced a new character and tell the story from his point of view without any of the cliches, Mary Sues, etc. Arthur was a character all his own, and ready to prove it! Kudos to you!


risi chapter 15 . 7/23/2005
Someone on one of my lists rec'd this story. I've really enjoyed it, especially the way Arthur wanted to stay a muggle and create computer games. I also liked the way you incorporated future technology into your story as a casual thing without going into a long narrative about it. It all fit in well and seemed natural. I can almost see it happening. Great writing, this will become a favorite to rec for when someone is looking for a good gen story. :-)
AKA Hummer chapter 15 . 7/16/2005
That was such a spiffy story! I love it so much! I love the beginning when Harry and Arthur were dealing with the fact that they could be normal (for them, at least)... Anyway, your story was *wonderful* and I was ecstatic when I found it was finished.. *huggles* I also loved the relationship between Snape and Arthur. Hah.. It's funny it took two generations of Potter look-alikes to get over his immense hatred of James Potter to see Arthur for him and not James. *grins* By the way, I've been wondering... Did Ron die as well as Arthur? Cus he hadn't been mentioned.. *twitch*

*blinks wildly* Anyway, again, I enjoyed reading this a lot, and Imma go stalk your other stories now (if you have other stories).. Xb
Verdenia chapter 15 . 7/12/2005
Wow, what a great little saga you have made! I really like Arthur, and his relationships with Remus and Severus and Tonks are very cool!

I'd love to read more, but I understand if you feel you've finished with this story set.

Ceyxa chapter 15 . 7/10/2005
Really a brilliant fic. Well written, and a very original take at Harry's post-Hogwarts life. And I definately like Snape's response to Arthur.
de profuundis chapter 15 . 6/30/2005
another great story! i liked the idea of harry's son (who probably could be the next dark lord) almost completely derisive of the magical community. thanks for having him stick to his guns and not cave in to all the pressure to attend Hogwarts. -d.p.
MissBee003 chapter 15 . 6/23/2005
I just wanted to say that I've stayed up most of the night because I just had to finish before I went to bed. I couldn't go to sleep until I knew what happened. ]

Great job!

Most stories that I've read that feature Harry's child or children are really mundane and boring. I enjoyed this one imensly. ]

SeveraSnape6 chapter 15 . 6/21/2005

I love your storries! keep up the good writing.
Elle chapter 15 . 6/9/2005
I liked this story (not as much as Resonance, mind you) and the characters, but I found it somewhat depressing. That someone would give the magical world - something that does exist in the HP universe - for video games seemed a sad commentary on society for me.
carrot chapter 15 . 5/29/2005
This is the third time I've re-read your story. It is extremely well written, and the characters are all believable extrapolations of themselves. Good Job.
Vert chapter 15 . 5/29/2005
That's funny, it is the second fanfiction I read where somebody do a videogame on the wizarding world !

A very strange story, but fascinating, with an Arthur who look like no other potentially Harry Potter's son ! Seeing all this people years after the disparition of Oncle Voldie... Quiet interesting !

mjmolly2 chapter 15 . 5/13/2005
I liked this story very much.

Will you be finishing it? I would very much like to read more.
CheddarTrek chapter 15 . 5/1/2005
I must admit that I really ended up enjoying this story. It wasn't overdone, and it was certainly the best "child of the famous Harry Potter" story that I've read.

Jane Average chapter 15 . 4/26/2005
I thoroughly enjoyed that! Although I have to say I didn't feel like it was really OVER. Perhaps that's just my selfish curiosity talking, though :)
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