OH wow
I don't know what is better the fact that I totally agree with Arthur going round the bend, or as you put it snape having someone to "pull the cork".
I really am not sure about the working of Magic the game so I am assuming that the first scene makes sense. I really do enjoy this story and can't wait to see what Snape has to say to harry when he wakes next. The one thing I think that will be the most strange is if he actually gets memories of his wife back will we find out about her?
I hope that everything goes alright, but I am concerned as to why harry never knew he might get this bad in the first place, I mean it sounds like he has lived with this curse for years. I think we will need to hear why he didn't turn to Snape earlier.
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So who's Nina? Hermione? Red to black hair, you say? So that woul be Tonks? Or Ginny? Hm... Whoever it is, I want to see their reactions, so update soon! :)

This really is quite original. I can't wait to see how it ends up. Snape was very good in this chapter, I think. He's still scary and whatnot to kids, but he's not as nasty as he was when Harry was at Hogwarts. Can't wait to see how it ends up!

Interesting! Normally I don't like OC:s, but Arthur's really convincing and Harry too. I liked the Diagon Alley scenes - the post office was good! Post more soon!;)

Harry is not too nice...he is a lot less Cocoo than my own mom, but she is very, very nice to me...I think that it is very probable that Harry would be so compassionate to his son...He can see how much it is hurting Aurthur...I can't wait for the rest...Lather the updates on please. Don't hold back

I love it.

this is great!

Heh. I liked how Arthur admited to sometimes thinking Harry was a crackpot. :) Update soon!

nice chapter. Snape's reply are quite in character.

i have really enjoyed this story, i love Arthur and Harry, both are great really sympathetic and Arthur is so Harry's son - with the concealing of his things and his courage - i loved it, a bit sad that he has no magic but maybe this was part of the nefarious plot against his father? please. Ok well i can't wai to see Snape, the flow and charcaterisation are great, and i loved the bit in the owlery with the sarky girls. More please soon.

Anothjer great start to a good story

Ok so this is my first ever review but I love your stories SO much! I like the new one but still look for the new chapters of the adoption story. You are SUCH a good story teller

Great chapter

Another great chapter. I love this story; it has become one of my favorites. Please update really soon. I think Arthur is a great character, and I cannot wait to read more about him. I'm also looking forward to reading more Snape. :-)

wonderful new chapter. you've really got me on the edge of my chair in suspense, wondering what's going to happen next (what part does Elsa play, innocent meddling or something more sinister)
Harry works perfectly, and I'm REALLY liking your Arthur (the part where he asked his friend Roger and the cloning story was just brilliant!)
I am most definitely looking forward to your next update, keep up the great work!