Reviews for Brighter Morning
Random Flyer chapter 15 . 5/8/2011
Thanks for this story. I enjoyed it quiet a bit. It's nice that some one wrote a story from a muggle's perspective of the wizarding world.

All of your stories are very well planned out, especially you recent 'Resonance' series. I was wondering how much preplanning you put into your stories. I find that if I plann too much then I lose interest in the story before I really start writing it, but if I don't plan enough I have a difficult time making the story become complex without forcing it. Do you write most of the story before posting, or just make it up as you go along?

Thanks again for the story, I'm looking forward to the next update on 'Resolution', too.
Espied7 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Fun story; love it!
Judy516 chapter 15 . 3/3/2011
I've been reading the whole Resonance, etc. series and had never noticed this one. Just wanted to say I enjoyed it very much. You're a talented writer and I have yet to tire of reading your work.
farwalker chapter 15 . 2/26/2011
Nice Tale - I liked it, and liked that Arthur chose to stay in the Muggle world, but learning the skills he wants...

Of Course, when he has kids...
shedoc chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
i'm so glad i found this fic again - i loved it the first time and its just as good now!
hpspiffy chapter 15 . 12/1/2010
Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your fix. The idea behind it is so original that when I began reading it the other day I was worried it would be a disaster, but the development of your original character Arthur and your characterization of the canon characters quickly put all of my fears to rest. I have an unfortunate habit of not remembering to look at the name of the author of a fix before I begin to read it, but upon seeing that this fix is from the same author as the Resonance fics my only question is how had I not read this fic already ... And where can I read more about Arthur ... Anyway, just wanted to say thanks for the great fic!
MrRobertsIII chapter 15 . 11/16/2010
Just reread this fic, and enjoyed it greatly. Any chance of an update of sorts, perhaps a chapter or two some years in the future?
Ansku chapter 15 . 11/7/2010
Love it :)
anemix chapter 15 . 10/8/2010
This was a really great story and I really enjoyed it, though you left out an encompassing explanation for why Harry was essentially abandoned. I understand how people have to move on with life, but they stopped checking on him at all, or listening in on possible cures. Arthur is a really unique character in the Potterverse though, and I really liked reading from his perspective. Keep writing!


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Marj123 chapter 15 . 7/15/2010
Just enjoyed this for the second time. Well done and thank you.
escapist chapter 15 . 6/10/2010
I loved this story. It was really cute and actually had some action, which I hadn't expected.

I've read a few next gen. fics that do the whole "Merlin" thing with Harry's son, too. But I like how in this one Arthur wasn't immediately sold on Hogwarts and magic, and even refused to be given more power. It made it a little more realistic and interesting. I mean, magic can be a little overwhelming, especially not growing up with it.

I loved the interactions between all the characters. I loved that even though it's an over all happy story, the lost time still affects them. Thanks for sharing this amazing fic!
EvilDime chapter 15 . 3/21/2010
Oh wow, that was an idea I hadn't read before! I really liked your Arthur and his cautious-negative stance towards the wizarding world. Very intriguing and well-written!

I skipped over here for a look after I read that Aspen liked your long fic so much. Anything she recommends is worth considering in my eyes. ;D I figured I'd read a short one first to see whether I like your writing style. I do. So once I find the time and feel like reading more non-slash fiction, I will probably tackle 'Resonance'. : )

So, until later, I think. (-)

- Dime
Jisa chapter 15 . 3/4/2010
Loved it!
Dave Dopp chapter 15 . 1/30/2010
Thank you so much! This is without a doubt the very best "Harry has a child" story I've read.

Your writing is professional level. I noticed NO grammar or sentence structure errors and no misspelled words. Your plot is quite believeable and very well-constructed.

Your characters are extremely well-drawn. I especially enjoyed the mature, original Harry Potter characters. Harry, Severus, Remus and Hermione acted exactly as real people would as adults.

I did see a couple of character weaknesses. Molly, I'm sure, would have been much more emotional in her greeting for Harry and Arthur. To make her more believable, you would need a little more extensive narrative background on the personality effects of losing much of her family in the war.

Tonks' ability to transform into a wisp of smoke needs much narrative development. Her metamorphmagus talents allow her to change her appearance but not her physical nature. Some background on developing the "smoke" talent would help.

These two very minor flaws do not detract from the overall excellent quality of this story.

As with any well-written story, you did an excellent job of drawing the plot to a satisfying close with no hanging plot lines. The story is quite satisfying as a stand alone story, yet has an infinite possibility for sequels.

Thank you again for a rather enjoyable hour or so of reading. I look forward to reading more of your efforts.


Dave Dopp

Windcrest, Texas

ddopp satx.
Cathy-Ann chapter 15 . 1/28/2010
I would like to see a continuation wherein Arthur learns more magic and attends Hogwarts for one year as he develops a realationship with Sara Weasely.
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