Reviews for Brighter Morning
purrfus chapter 15 . 1/25/2010
Entertaining. Complex. The look at the other side is very well done. I wanted more Arthur and Snape interaction.
xxnarufanxx chapter 15 . 1/21/2010
hey i really like your story!

great plot and writing style!

i am just sad that this is the end! i want to know so badly how arthur will turn out. is he going to become a wizard or will he stay a muggle with just a little magic?

eventhoug thank you for this great story
Blue Flyhight chapter 15 . 1/11/2010
Wow. This was really good and interesting. Thanks for the great read.
Bronze Eagle chapter 15 . 1/2/2010
Wow! I absolutely loved this story! Arthur was quite adorable, and I loved the way you introduced ideas about the wizarding world through him. It is quite presumptuous of wizards, isn't it, to assume that all muggle-borns will want to stay in their world? Harry is the perfect supportive parent, while still haiving problems and issues of his own. Loved the way you characterized Snape, too, though it's too bad that Draco was unable to grow up and put his father's ideals behind him.

Anyway, I absolutely adored this story. Thank you so much for writing it!
teehee chapter 15 . 12/23/2009
i loved this story. i honestly wasn't expecting any story about harry's kids to be so good but u've made a really likable character in arthur and harry seems cool too.
librarywitch chapter 15 . 11/11/2009
This was a freakin' awesome story. Well written, brillant in fact. I would love to see a sequel in this AU. I love Arthur, he is a tough kid. Love it! Thanks for sharing your awesome talent with us!
Q genna chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Thought I'd sketch out some of the interesting points in your short story.

I. Arthur Potter

A. Merlin level Talent

B. Muggle Game Designer -

1. Multi level gamers would love the real life tales.

2. What if he could animate the game characters so they had a life of their own?

3. Can make his fortune that way? What would a muggle like him do with muggle born wizards/witches before they went to Hogwarts? I've read Techno Mage stories...what could he do with the combined talents.

C. Wants his father to be comfortable.

II. Harry Potter

A. Trying to get his groove back.

B. Writing a book.

C. Old enemies who want to cause him and his son harm.
Q genna chapter 15 . 9/21/2009
I like this story. I wish you would have expanded it like the Resonance series.

Arthur Potter is a good original character. I look forward to seeing what Rip Van Winkle Harry Potter would do with the extra years he's been given.
kitcat19us chapter 15 . 8/19/2009
great story
jojobevco chapter 15 . 7/10/2009
Good Story
T chapter 15 . 6/21/2009
I loved this story with how Harry got better and Arthur got to know magic but wasn't pushed into it! I feel like a sequel is necessary though because to me it feels like the story just stopped and is waiting for something!
Miss Teinge chapter 15 . 5/23/2009
This is really great so far-I'm a big fan of Arthur's attitude toward Magic, and how you're presenting it; no irrational fear of the unknown, just an appreciation for Muggle technology's occasional superiority.

Is this REALLY as "short" work, or are we going to get, "Brighter Afternoon" and "Brighter Evening" as well?
HDDarkensaw chapter 15 . 5/22/2009
I just have to say, this story was absolutely amazing! I tried really hard to read it all in one sitting, but ended up falling asleep. I finished it this morning. AMAZING! ! ! !
4grendel chapter 15 . 5/2/2009
I just re-read this story (It must have been the 4th or 5th time) It's really great! I like Arthur! Do you perhaps consider a sequel...?
rillikee chapter 15 . 3/19/2009
I've always just disregarded this story of yours because of the summary, but yesterday i decided to give it a go. i must say, i thoroughly enjoyed it.

if you ever finish resolution and the rest of the r's i think this story has great potential to continue on too. it really is magical.

its so refreshing to see that they both dont get over harry getting well immediately like other authors might write, so much more realistic!

its also amazing that you've seamlessly killed off Ron without it being a big deal... though perhaps slightly unrealistic. i would love to see some interactions with a grown up Neville!

i love how Arthur is a muggle in the ways that matter to him, which are so different to the rest of the magical world. it really is a wonderful insight into his beautiful character. the whole story allows you to write harry's personality in the way you wish he could have been.

i really love how you somehow make such a heartcrunching story so filled with plot without the typical 'woe is me' monologues. so true to JK too. mention a tear to get the point across and move on without the typical angst disection of exactly where the tear landed and what exact thought brought it on... you draw on the humanity and brains of your readers to read between the lines. again, so refreshing!

i wish more writers were so professional... but then i guess, normally if theyre good enough to earn money for it, they usually make some sort of living from it so us mere paupers who cant afford real books cant read their writing!

woe is me :P

anyway, this is just me trying to expand on the fact that i loved this story.
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