"Natural hand conjurers are about as rare as Parselmouths," he commented quietly. Yeah, that's what I was thinking.

Harry was born 34 years ago but he looks 25 and his mind is actually 19? Wow, well, no wonder he's clinging to Arthur... Actually, wonder he's working at all...

And it seems to me that Arthur's magic is a lot stronger than average. Kids aren't supposed to be able to use real spells without a wand...

Très bien! Excellent!

I find myself releasing a breath as I return to he real world, like I would at the end of a particularly good film. :)

"This story is amazing..." breathed the teen from half-way around the world.

Very well written, very original. I liked it a lot. There should be a sequel! What happens with Arthur...? What does he choose? Does he accept magic?

Anyway, great story I definitely loved it!

I'd love to see a one-shot sequel to this. I really enjoyed it, even though this is at least my second time reading it. :)

i liked this stoty alot. it seemes to have a few original ideas that i haven't come across before...the only thing I'm saddened by is Arthur being so... well, predujised i guess, but i understand why

Great job and thanks for sharing

Happy future writing

ditte mai

denmark

Hey there! Just wanted to say I really enjoyed your story. Great concept and well written. Hope to see what else you wrote!

Hey, I'm Rodrigo,

I'd like to say a comment bout your fic. ( Brighter Morning). It's great.

And you're a very good writer.

thank you, and congratulations for a good job.

This was a really interesting concept for a story and I really enjoyed it.

A very enjoyable story I could not stop reading from beginning to end. Arthur is an engaging and endearing character and I enjoyed reading about the various older versions of people in the Harry Potterverse. I love the technology thread in the story as well, especially Arthur's idea for a game using the wizard universe.

However, reading it was not as wonderful as it could be. The quotation marks for conversations seemed to have disappeared from most of the chapters.

Ending up reading most of this on mugglenet because all your quotation marks here look like tiny little paperclips. It might just be my computer, but it was giving me a really bad headache. Uh.. still loved this story. You should write a sequel!

I'm so glad Arthur has magic! I was kind of thinking something along this lines of it being suppressed, because he had to take care of his dad and grow up fast. This is the first story I've read where Harry had short term memory loss (reminds me of that movie 50 First Dates) and I hope he stays cured. So... I should probably read on!

great story so far !

I love Arthur ! and this Harry

and of course your storys can only be good !

nintschi

I really liked this story, it was well written, if a little rushed in the end. Thank you for sharing.

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