|Reviews for Dark Side of the Moon|
| Crazybuu chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
I honestly don't like how Nabiki is going to get away with selling pictures of Ranma. No matter how you sell it, she was selling underage porn. Without consent as well. Plus, I hate how Nabiki just manipulated Ranma again. Or I just always see Nabiki as a cold heartless bitch and could be wrong about her in your story.
| spicarus chapter 2 . 8/19/2014
Please come back to this story. I'd like to see the reactions of Akane, Nodoka and the pair of idiots...I mean fathers.
Honestly, I don't think Akane would react any differently than in cannon. Calling Ranma a pervert and believing that she's trying to trick Akane somehow.
I'm interested in how you're going to interpret Nodoka. Or rather, which of the two main fan-fiction interpretations you'll go with for her.
As for dumb and stupid (I leave it to you to decide which is which); I seem to recall that, when Ranma was locked in girl form by Herb, they tried to marry Ranma-chan to Soun so the schools could be joined.
Whether or not I'm mistaken about the above, they could still try/suggest it now. Then you'd have to decide how Nodoka would react to this. I say Nodoka because Ranma would most likely try to kill her father, Akane would try to place the blame (and perversion) on Ranma, while Nabiki and Kasumi would make their displeasure known in ways befitting their characters.
If you were inclined to have Nodoka follow through with the contract, you could set things up so that the Senshi (one or two of them not the whole group) managed to get Ranma out of that situation.
Also, I'm curious about Pluto's reaction. She may or may not consider it a good thing to have an extra moon princess around possibly challenging Usagi for the throne of crystal Tokyo. And that's assuming there isn't something from Ranma's past life that would worry Pluto more.
So let me say again, please come back to this story. When you can find time.
| Poetheather1 chapter 2 . 8/18/2014
This was a really good story. I wish there was more because you were doing some really interesting things with it. Great characterization and fun plot. Well done.
| Ranmayamabushi chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
Yet anouther of yours I hope to see more of... lol and people that take the stories that these fan fictions as *gospil* tend to make me laugh even while their an irratation... Im mean Sheash these stories for thought up and not based on any sort of reality yet they go on and on about how in the Original This wasnt like what you did how Dare you say Ranma can fly and has blue hair! lol
| Clare chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
Updated in 2004?! Ooooh, I hate you so. But I also love you for writing all of this. Gah!
Anyways, good story. I would love to see it continued.
| Maltrazz chapter 2 . 11/6/2012
Great story. I am curious, though. You said the pairing was still undecided. Is Ryoga a possibility? The to did seem a bit friendly then most fics. Either way, I am looking forward to more.
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
this is interesting but i hope you are not going to have ranma become all girly and pair HIM with a guy.
| Raynze76 chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
hope to see this story updated soon, got a great story going dont let it remain unfinished
| potter phoenix 1 chapter 2 . 12/26/2010
really good read and am hoping this story is not dead like it probely is hope you update soon
| Skye Silverwing chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Hm... honestly, I hate when people decide that becoming a Senshi locks Ranma in female form for good. In spite of that, this story seems to be decent quality to me, has good pacing and I don't mind the revelation that more then a few characters' personalities were merely a facade. All in all it demolishes the perceived Ranma, replacing him with a genuinely female version. I hope you will back that off into the Tomboy we expect the girl Ranma to be, rather then a blubbering girl, emotionally destroyed by the prospect of having lost her manhood.
Ultimately, it is not a bad fic. and it deserves to be updated. I hope to see some soon.
| Guardoflight chapter 2 . 10/1/2008
Enjoyable read, interesting how Ryoga's and Ranma attacks were ineffective on the youma, I hope you will continue writing this very good story.
| iceland chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
it is a good story to read and wonder what happens next to ranma after turning in to a sailor scout. how does ranma get along with her sister from moon kingdom.
| Lord Kamui chapter 2 . 8/2/2007
Hey! this one is quite good. are you going to continue writing it? I sure hope you do.
| Dumbledork chapter 2 . 2/17/2007
Excellent story. Stories putting emphasis on charcter development are my favourites. Please update.
| Adeptis chapter 2 . 11/10/2006