|Reviews for A Long and Weary March|
| BettiAnn chapter 17 . 7/26/2013
Thank you for finishing! This was the alternate ending to "A Little Princess" that I had been looking for. You have a very polished and refreshing style of writing.
| Q the Professor chapter 17 . 4/1/2013
Well-written, gentle, heartwarming, and surprisingly effective.
The title, in particular, is a very felicitous choice.
The Biblical themes are well chosen, too, and are an added plus for the self-professed "Biblical geek" that I am.
And the updated versions of Lottie and Mr. Carrisford are particularly sweet. I've taken the liberty of adding the story here ( /FanficRecs/ALittlePrincess), in the interests of wider circulation. Keep up the good work!
| grovyle the thief lover chapter 17 . 2/5/2013
this was a beatifull and amzing story! i really loved to read it and is to me a pleasure to revieuw it! i hope you keep writing stories like this you have an amazing skill for it
keep it up amazing work
| wolfmizu chapter 17 . 8/2/2011
This is Wonderful! How old is Sara supposed to be here?
| Annabeth-Kahlan-Alanna-Cara chapter 17 . 4/4/2011
I really liked your story!
| Quentin 316 chapter 17 . 3/6/2011
Not really a huge fan of fanfic, but this was a good story! After overcoming my initial incredulity at meeting Sara grown up (she's still fixed at 9-13 in my mind), this one worked very well. It has a lot of touches in common with the anime adaptation - did you use it as one of your sources? And Lottie was a riot. Good work!
| Silent fragaments chapter 17 . 12/15/2010
wow this story is amazing! I love how through you didn't imitata the writing style (god help anyone that does) you stayed true to the book! Amazing!
| Katamabob chapter 17 . 11/7/2010
It was lovely! A fabulous 'what if' story. Great imagination, great writing and true narrative talent. Very nice. Loved Henry, and I loved Becky finally standing up to Miss Minchin. Maria was also fun, and I love how Lottie's grown ;)
Sweet and wonderful, and the language of the dialogue is impressively similar to the book's.
| To-Far-Out chapter 17 . 6/24/2010
hi, i really like your story i think its good. the whole; what if sara wasn't saved from the seminary is something i have thought over myself. I just wanted to let you know that 'A little princess' can also be found in books, and seeing that your story is based more on the books then the movie you might want to put it up there as well.
| me chapter 17 . 5/20/2010
I just finished reading the whole thing.
THIS IS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO GOOD!
Now I'm going to read all of your other stories!
| Sapphire Warrioress chapter 17 . 2/25/2010
A great lighthearted tale.
Although things seemed a little rushed as far as the romance between Henry and Sara and the pace of the story went overall it was a fun and delightful read.
I loved Lottie's diversion and how Miss Minchin was humiliated, and would love to see you write more for this category.
Maybe a story with Miss Amelia deciding to act and putting the pieces together about who is living nextdoor and his search for Captain Crewe's daughter?
As you said, compared to your LOTR stories the writing here isn't as developed, but your plot was intriguing and I like how you wrote believable realistic futures for all of Sara's friends.
Thanks for sharing this tale and good luck with future stories.
| CGinny chapter 17 . 11/17/2009
aw... i loved it... it made me feel so many emotions a time, i cried, laughed, smiled... just as any great story should do...
x x CG*
| Anne chapter 17 . 10/7/2009
I never thought to look for A Little Princess fanfiction before, and found this one by accident. It was a fun read and makes me want to re-read the book!
| Cristalake chapter 17 . 1/26/2009
It was sweet. I love the dialect.
| PrincessAlica chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
I love Little Princess!
You are doing a great job and I look forward to readig the rest of what you have done!