|Reviews for The Thing: Forever Hunt|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
It looks like you got cut off halfway. Where's your plot?
| The Arsenal 3.0 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
You have the right idea but the text is in a huge paragraph making kind of hard to read. Try looking at other stories for examples on implementing more paragraphs.
I realize it's been four years since this has been posted but if you read this I hope you won't give up on writing. Hope this helps, one Thing fan to another!