Reviews for You give up a few things
StarSpinner678 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Aww, he had a family! Awesome stuff.

I like the idea. Most people would say he got his cybonic parts while fighting for the map to tresure planet (I'm one of them) but the idea of the two things being seperate is pretty good. I've never thought of that. But isn't that why we do things like ? to see what others saw in the story?

Anyways, really good.
samus18 chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
It was short, but very sweet. I liked it. _
Backroads chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
*shivers* Oh goodness... that was so sad! Very powerful. Good job! *huggles Silver*
DanaeMariSkywalker chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Very good story.
Sefie Lynne tilmitt chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
Omigosh, I really like This! _ Good job!
snowsparrow chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
nice, very nice
1 question: will there be any more of this? (the chapters, I mean)
The chapters aren't too short, why don't you people leave others alone for writing short chapters? (this is to others)
keep smiling
PhantomVarg chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Cool. This is so cool, even if it's short. Very good.
pepoluan chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
Nice try! But I think you should make this more of an Angst story, about how Silver lost his appendages *and* his family as well, and that drove him to become a Pirate, a leader one as well.
Janna Silver Hawkins chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
I know it was short, but I'm probably gonna add onto it.
Raine Ishida chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
Do you REALLY want to know what I think? ;) It was way, WAY too short.
ArcherofDarkness and Callie chapter 1 . 5/8/2004
great tie in with the movie...I'm gonna go watch it real soon. These fan-fics really make you think about the movie