Reviews for Playing for Keeps
lily-petal chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
This was a great story! Its not often that you have the honur of reading a great story, most of the stories on here a crap now, but yours im happy to say is one of the best ones ive read in a while!
skenshingumi chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Another well-done and sexy one-shot. Kaoru doesn't know how lucky she is.
Strawberry'd chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
I LOVE cheesecake! XD So not to the point _

This is so cute! I loved it and I think this is VERY well written!

I DID notice some errors however _~

I have an eye for mistakes XD

You used "there" instead of "their"

And when you said "uh-huh" you missed the last "h" so it came out "uh-hu"

Just wanted to point that out XD

Great job!
Fredurica chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
You should write more it seams like a waste of such a grand piece of work seem so unfinished
japanese-punkfairy chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
*giggles at the ending* that was so cute! I loved it. _~x
Indygodusk chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
Quite delightful, but I noticed that in two of your one-shots that KK get together because someone attacks Kaoru. Is assault neccessary to show possesion?
Triste1 chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
I'm starting to get unhealthily addicted to your work. I would also like to point out, whether you have been told this yet or not, I'm not sure, that most of your "there"s should have been "their". Hope to see more fics from you soon.
Saiera chapter 1 . 10/13/2004
Overall it's sweet, even though Kenshin is kind of creepy in his stalker-ing ways.
Jupiter's Light chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
Another fantastic story!
Late March chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
I love this one shot! Write more like it soon!
Saskiamq chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
... Uf This fic made me blush so many time ja ja bu i love it . Wow u are a very good writer hope u do contnie very soon,The best of luck. Love how kenshi is in this fic
Myuu-Foxgirl chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
I have just one thing to say: hot damn. Holy hot damn. this rocks! so steamy, sexy, full of romance.. Miya!
en route chapter 1 . 8/11/2004



you just gotta say it twice! its soo waffy with its wonderful fluffiness...

love it!
Soniya Himoura chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
i like i like i like. i lovwe you work. well hope you finish you r other story's soon.
noner89 chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
plz update soon love this is good
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