Reviews for Tactician in the Shadows
Reiko x 3 chapter 8 . 5/15/2006
Reiko: i finally decided which OC I'm going to use. She was originally a character based on my tacctician in Fire Emblem, but she can manage a secondary role just as well. Here's her basic stats:

Name: Tatsu Shinraihoshi

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Race: Half-dragon (keeps it a secret)

Skin-tone: Fair

Eye Color: Ice blue


Color: Black

Length: Upper back

Style: Tousled, pulled back into a ponytail


Upper Body: Dark green tunic

Lower Body: Light brown pants

Footwear: Calf-high leather boots


Shoulders: Light green traveler’s cloak

Neck: Silver necklace w/ an amethyst pendant

Weapons: wakizashi, kosuka, magic (currently dormant)

Special talents: Dormant magic ability (it won’t stay dormant for much longer)

Dark: Tatsu, ne. I guess she works. We still love your fic.

Rei: *hiding from Dark* O_O No more demon form. No more demon form...

Dark: Oh, get over it already. I'm not going to kill you; I'd end up killing myself as well.

Reiko: -_- My other selves have issues... Eh, update soon. Ja ne!
Min the Noodle chapter 8 . 12/20/2005
Yay! You finally updated! *does the happy dance* I've been waiting for this FOREVER! (coughcoughsortacough)

I loved the way you rewrote the battle scene at the ruins! It's one thing to play through it (y'know, hacking through enemies and all that good stuff) and a totally different one to read about it. I really liked the part in the beginning about Wil not being able to hear the chipping away of the wall. I'm surprised you thought of it- and plenty glad you put it in!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Maybe we'll see some OCs!


P.S. Romance is fine. _
Vaun Harkinian chapter 8 . 12/17/2005
Nice story. Did you know vampires are actually real? No I'm not a crazy heretic. It's a skin disease called Porphyria, it causes retraction of the gums, reactions to the sun and garlic, pale skin, and extra growth of hair on the face and hands. Anyway, I'll be submitting an OC as well.
TheWatcherandReader chapter 7 . 7/23/2005
This is interesting so i hope you update! And i know this might be a bit weird, but if you have vampires, why not werewolves? Just a thought. Well hope i can read more.
dude chapter 7 . 6/13/2005
Hi I just started reading your story and I think it is good but I have one request can you add in a little Lyn/Chris sooner or later thx by
dude chapter 7 . 6/13/2005
Hi I just started reading your story but I think it is great I just have one request if possible could you maybe toss in a little Lyn/chris sooner or later thx by
Eclipse Rose chapter 7 . 6/13/2005
HELLO! How, are you? Hope that you're okay. Oh, well... WHY THE HELL TOOK YOU SO LONG TO UPDATE! This is one of my favorites stories, and I always remember it. SO please update soon _. And, your tactician is definetly NOT A GARY-STU. If he was, he would be an ultra-powerlful-can-make-everything character _

Vampires! I love it. Oh, my god, need to read more!

Could you accept me as an OC? If you find a message in your inbox from a mail with "geb" in it, subject OC, please read it _, and then you see if you can accept me. PLEASE!

TheAZNUnleashed chapter 7 . 6/13/2005
Wow, this is a NICE story you've got going. I can't wait... Please write more soon! :)
man chapter 7 . 6/12/2005
... Dude. Why do you take so long to update? I forgot about this fiction...

For the double class thing:

Myrmidon becomes either:

A. Swordmaster.

B. The character that "Dias of All Final" made.

C. Rurouni, which is a samurai with no lord.


Good fanfictioN! Thanks for updating!
Reiko x 3 chapter 6 . 6/6/2005
Rei: O.O ...only one OC? T_T I dun wanna decide...

Dark: How many OCs have we come up with anyway?

Reiko: About 44, I think. But only 7 of them aren't specifically related to anything else, and one of them is sheer overkill in order for her to survive what we put her through.

Dark: Yeah... The immortality bit is a little overkill, but how else is she supposed to survive an entire army of demons out for her blood?

Reiko: So Sabrina is DEFINATELY not an option. Hm... I'll try to make up my mind on the OC thing. Update soon. Ja ne!
Dias of All Final chapter 6 . 4/15/2005
Very interesting, to say at least. I mean the tacticion'a a half-vampire? And I think I'll send you an OC of my own later. I'll be waiting for the next update.
DotDotDotMan chapter 6 . 1/31/2005

Wait a second...

What class is Heather?

I think some of the classes that you made were orginal and interesting.



Do you know about the Fire Emblem 8

(Fire Emblem 2 in America) dual career path?

In it, after you reach a certain level and certain skills and use a certain item, you get to choose if the character becomes one class or another.(Not exactly sure what to do exactly.)

I think it's like the diagram below...

3rd class choice A


\ 3rd class choice B

\ /

\ /

2nd class choice A


1st class-


2nd class choice B

/ \

/ \

/ 3rd class choice C

3rd class choice D

... Or something like that...

I'll tell more in the e-mail...

I await your fiction in eager anticipation!
Yami no Kirbie chapter 5 . 7/21/2004
awesome. And Chris definitely isn't a Gary-Stu. He's...funny. ;;

The half-vampire thing is a nice twist. I don't usually read stuff with OC's in it or revolving around the tactician (because I always think that they'll be Mary-Sues or Gary-Stus) but hey, you might just have changed my mind.

Maybe I'll write one myself. -twitch- Agh, now look what you've done to me...

I'd like to make a cameo in the story, but I don't think I'm a..._loyal_ enough reviewer yet. Heh...I plan to be, though.

Update soon!
Reiko x 3 chapter 5 . 7/20/2004
Reiko: I plan on being as loyal a reader as possible. However...

Dark: There is the entire issue about the fact that she has two alternate personas, me and Rei.

Rei: Dunno if you'd just want Reiko for the cameo or if you feel like having me and Dark cameo as seperate entities.

Reiko: Let me know which you'd prefer. I'd give you my e-mail address, but...I don't really check my mail that frequently. Course I don't really get that much mail so it's never really mattered. Update soon. Ja ne!
Angel of Fate1 chapter 5 . 7/11/2004
*Starry-eyed* Aah, how interesting the plot is... And yay, to make a cameo or even join the party...

Lucius: *Whaps Hitomi playfully with his staff* Knock it off! You've been acting like this the whole time. *Smiles*

*Snaps out of her... Trance?* Oh! Sorry... ; I can't help it... Especially when it involves half-vampires!

Mirae: You've been fascinated by vampires since you were little... Well, I can't blame you then.

Bwee... *Sticks her tongue out playfully* Oh yeah, I'm still inspired... And you gave me credit! That's good to hear, at least!

Sain: Gee, it's nice to see you happy, Milady...

*Smiles* You're probably just saying that because you are my knight.

Kent: Don't be such a suck-up, Sain.

Sain: T_T But I'm not!
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