Reviews for What if Lisa had entered the Miss Macross Contest? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo for Lisa Minmei dont have any chance And Rick is a fool for no see the evident ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh My God. I cant believe it. All the situation is so funny. Poor Lisa.. what trouble ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bwahahaha! Oh you are SO evil! LOL. But yeah, I've never thought of the hilarity that could ensue if Lisa entered the pageant like Minmei did. That would've been chaos and yes, Lisa IS hot. Need to go do some groceries so yeah, better put this on the list first... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is my fav couple |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness, I love the ending to this fic with Rick talking to his son about how he fell in love with his mother. So touching and cute at the same time. I love it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe... this is such a cute story! I loved it! I like the way you portrait Lisa here. She's a beautiful woman, but when the time comes, she shows them that she's not only a pretty face but a strong woman with a brave heart. They were lucky to have her around during that attack! And the last scenes at the hospital were so sweet! I'm glad Lisa did not win. I wouldn't want to see her turned into Miss Macross... :P Great work! I loved this story! Thanks for sharing your talent with us! :D |
![]() ![]() Funny little fic. Rick had some adorable clueless moments. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! The characters were well done and behaved very genuinely. You managed the story well and paced it just right, keeping a good flow and never hanging up. And above all, it's adorably cute, and pretty much what we all wanted to see in the first place.. Well done indeed! |
![]() ![]() WOW! Your fic is GREAT! ... my english is good enough to understand almost everything (Tks God)! Congratulations! I love it! Regards |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just re-read your story for the millionth time (or pretty close to that). I just LOVE everything about it. Great writing, great character interaction, GREAT idea! We all know Lisa should have been in that competition and that it was all bought anyway. Minmay must have slipped a few bucks here & there for bribery :P I would love to see another story from you. |
![]() ![]() Cute, but it srtips the fun out of yelling 'IDIOT!' at the TV screen whenever Rick ignores Lisa so he can be with Minmei. Tech quibbles: 1 The humans don't know the Zentraedi's name until 'Blind Game', several episodes after 'Miss Macross'. 2 Chapter 6 says that Lisa spent two weeks in the hospital, but the voting results weren't in in all that time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() O! this is great! At the beginning I wasn't very sure, but then the story got really good! Congratulations. An your fan art is great too ;) Saludos! |
![]() ![]() Oh funny! but I think Lisa would have had a little ore of trouble into accepting thatm she is after all somewhat shy about all of this kind of stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() bravo! nicely done. :-) |