|Reviews for More|
| diffalo-jones chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
You're a very good writer. Try to add more dioluge, if you can, to make it flow better.
| Dark Seraphim chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
I love this one. It's sweet and it shows how they pay attention to the tiniest details. Not to mention that any sort of romance would be slow and steady between these two. I think you've pulled them off quite well.
| Chrono Fantasy1 chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
It's good, hopefully you'll be adding some more to it.