Reviews for Dusk
Lost.Kai chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
Good story
thetabetanu chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
Very cute, very cute. I like it. This strikes me as a wildly unlikely attitude for Kairi to take, but if she did, she would act just like this. I think Sora got flustered a little too quickly when Kairi presses him after her little speech about her grandmother- " 'W-what're you talking about?' Sora suddenly felt nervous." I mean, really. I can see him stuttering when he actually breaks down and confesses what happened, but not right away.
Promise chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
CUTE! I just finished up ur labyrinth fic and I hadn't relized taht you wrote these as well I read them when the frist came out! (well the other 2 anyways) I love this so much! thank you for writing it! :-)
malevolentScribbler chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
I loved all three... I just decided to revciew on this one. I hope you keep up the good work, and keep on writing.