Reviews for If He Could OnlyTurn the Hands of the Clock Around
countegor chapter 2 . 10/5/2004
Very sad story and it almost made me cry, really. You have very good skills to do stories. I followed every word and it amazed me. This proved to be a very good one! Bye!
Bahzad chapter 2 . 10/2/2004
Good sotry!
Neutron Phantom chapter 2 . 9/29/2004
Oh, wow. This is so sad! You are making me cry! I LOVE IT! You are an awesome writer. Keep up the good work! *falls on ground and starts bawling*
ravyn chapter 2 . 9/28/2004
aw that was an awesome story! I absolutely loved it! Especially the part where theywere all like...and then they...and was just great all of it! you should write more like this i'm a sucker for a happy ending/angsty rest of the story
Eclipsed Soul chapter 2 . 9/27/2004
you are making me cry...aww man...I can feel the pain behind the words...I know how it feels...

*whipes tears* Very powerful stuff...this is probably one of the best stories I have ever read...and I have read a me on that

And that is something I will rarely say...

the's described me how I felt from loosing a loved one... Torn, hurt, it took me a very long time to heal from that...

Excellent, that is all I have to say. Great ending, great story in generel...

I'm sorry about your loss...
fanjimmy chapter 2 . 9/26/2004
This is a great ending.
gamechamp85 chapter 2 . 9/24/2004
that was a great story it made me cry and now my nose is a stuffy. that was a very touching story.
Majestic Twelve chapter 2 . 9/24/2004
That was so touching, Jess! Such a sad story! The ending almost brought tears to my eyes. The story is beautiful. And I feel terribly sorry for your loss. I think your story expressed the raw emotion of grief and pain and emotional weariness very well. Best wishes.
The CheezHead chapter 2 . 9/23/2004
That's so beautiful. I thought it was fine where you left off with the first chapter, but the second chapter made it bittersweet. A truly emotional and moving story. Great job!
lucyrocks73 chapter 2 . 9/23/2004
So sad... So beautiful... So poetic. I loved it. And thankyou for mentioning Snoopy! I for one think that catagory should have more stories. It's not lame, and it's not babyish. It's part of our past. What I mean by that is WRITE STORIES THERE! Again, lovely story.
pokey chapter 2 . 9/22/2004
I cried alot and now my nose is all stuffed up so I guess the story was a sucess.
Nomia chapter 2 . 9/22/2004
dang it! now you've just gone and made me cry again! still, a good way to end such a brilliant story
Nomia chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
how could you DO that? i'm crying my eyes out over here! i can't even read the screen and it's ALL YOUR FAULT! i agree with gardardguy200.
Eve4000 chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
it's beautiful, and horribly sad. But if this the Jimmy I know, he would at least try to turn back the hands of time. You are a wonderful writer.
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