|Reviews for The New Teacher|
| demonic hellfire chapter 33 . 3/7
Showed this story to friend of mine who is a published author. He said you use to many adjectives, that makes it look amateurish.
| Br0kenThOrn chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL.
| Guest chapter 47 . 9/21/2013
Great story, loved the many different aspects of this epic tale. My personal favorite would be when Laura meets the Parkers and they take her in.
| 1 white tree chapter 47 . 6/26/2013
Good story liked the ideas as well as the universe. Literally couldn't stop reading it. Looking forward to a sequel if you write one. Dani and Ben seem like a cute couple. If you do write a sequel then could you make Ben discover that he isn't a seemed like a good plot twist since Ben does eventually discover that Peter is the clone in the comics but no pressure just a fun idea. Really well written loved the idea of the four goblins teaming up. Peter adopting Laura was a clever idea that I have ever seen before. The characters were portrayed well and I enjoyed reading about their interactions with each other. Good luck with your writing.
1 white tree
| Dracconnis chapter 47 . 6/20/2013
Loved this fic
| Scrap333 chapter 47 . 4/1/2013
Cool story. Spend all Easter weekend reading it. Just wondering if any of the stories are sequals. The bios in them don't give an impression of that. I was also wondering what the AGU series is... Maybe a stupid question but I know about the differant acronyms that have that and I don't know which one it is considering it might not be either anyways.
| Lady Pryde chapter 47 . 3/7/2013
yay! haha! nice ending especially with the family bit!
| Lady Pryde chapter 42 . 3/7/2013
I really love this Peter/MJ/X-23 interaction; it's like they are getting the child they always wanted... just not the way they wanted one in true Spider-Man fashion ;) great work
especially loved the last bit starting with the nightmare till the end :) very sweet yet sad for Laura
| Lady Pryde chapter 32 . 3/6/2013
... not gonna lie, your OC is kinda ruining this story for me...
So far it's been beyond awesome and I've loved it, but then some ancient, immortal type guy comes out of no where are starts bringing dead heros back to life... that's very Mary Sue of him ;)
but it's your story... everything else though is really cool and I love the idea of Peter teaching at Xavier's!
| mkeeg91 chapter 47 . 1/21/2013
well now that it's over... wow! I wasn't ready for it to end! haha!
Love the Peter/MJ/Laura family interaction. well done with that
keep up the super awesome work!
| mkeeg91 chapter 32 . 1/21/2013
I was really enjoying this... like honestly number 1 favorite Marvel fic... then you added Guardian and resurrection of the dead team members... and that's kinda messing it up for me... but I'll bite cause everything else has been superb.
| RebukeX7 chapter 47 . 11/6/2012
Normally i'm good with reviews but this has left me speechless. Ill just sum this story up in one word
| HaywireEagle chapter 11 . 9/7/2012
Haha, Deer in the headlights. Though, I am sure he would have said something like 'Oh crap' or would have thought about it.
| HaywireEagle chapter 8 . 9/7/2012
I am liking this a lot, but some of the grammatical errors are a bit distracting. So it might need a rewrite to solve some of the minor errors.
| Gabriel-TDO chapter 47 . 6/21/2012
good enough that i've read this multiple times.