I'm glad that Peter didn't show the insane side of the spider-sense all that much, as having it cover threats to your wallet is a bit insane but considering they're his friends you did the right thing and didn't have it activate. (side note: in the comics, he's banned from his friend's poker games because he doesn't tell people how his powers work, so they think he'd auto win with it)

I've only just started but I like your writing style.

Fun story! Mini rant incoming:

UGH. "How could you know what it's like to lose someone?"

Well, excuuuuse me, Scott; I forgot that you are the only person on earth, nay the universe, to EVER lose someone. No one could possible understand or sympathize. *hard eye roll* This is one of the reasons why you're not very well liked, Scott!

Haha, the "no one understands" trope can be very unlikable in a character for me. Although, it is something that tends to be a trait in X-Men characters and is not your fault, haha.

Great story so far! And I like the Peter's server identity wasn't immediately revealed like in some stories.

I know I'm late to the whole "Ben's Girl" thing, but Amara seems the best pick. Danielle can be kind of odd romantically speaking, likely from the way her power hooks her into the base instincts of those around her. Rachel always came off as conflicted to the point of asexuality when she ran with Excalibur. And that leaves Amara.

It’s a shame Peter never realized that if he killed certain supervillains things like this wouldn’t happen. Or at least use his genius to lobotomize them or similarly passify them.

Surprised Scott isn’t being his usual super douche self and blaming normal humans for the actions of the FOH while ignoring that said normal humans hate the murderers, too? Yeah, it is kinda sad that I’m surprised, too. Scott isn’t exactly stable or reasonable or particularly good-natured.

From what I recall, Spider-Man actually has a decently effective healing factor. Enough that bruised muscles and cracked ribs heal overnight and shallow cuts and abrasions heal in minutes.

There? The school is in New York City. They should be saying “here”.

The student and gun thing isn’t new or more common. It’s simply that the media reports shoots more often now.

superb!

I've managed to do a shallow but wide kind of series of a marvel and DC crossover but its so hectic that I don't think I'll ever get around to typing it up and posting it. You've managed to do a great story that might be worthy of joining the official marvel universe , I don't know for sure since its defentally not up to me but I'd say that one day you should give it a try and send it in to them.

Yeah! Laura's in this now :) I love the father daughter pair that she and Logan make even when they're not sure of each other they always are part of each other the way that family is

Crud well that got messy for that group.

squeal of fangirl delight! Ben's going to be working with his brother and not have to hide that their brothers and the team gets to meet him :)

it's always funny when friends and relatives come back from the dead after a few years or so