Reviews for The New Teacher
TippyToe Zombie chapter 3 . 8/5/2019
Why doesn't Bobby know who Peter is. Bobby is one of Peter's best friends.
temporalandreaty chapter 27 . 6/21/2019
I'm glad that Peter didn't show the insane side of the spider-sense all that much, as having it cover threats to your wallet is a bit insane but considering they're his friends you did the right thing and didn't have it activate. (side note: in the comics, he's banned from his friend's poker games because he doesn't tell people how his powers work, so they think he'd auto win with it)
MatrixOfWumbo chapter 3 . 8/20/2018
I've only just started but I like your writing style.
Otaku-neku chapter 8 . 8/1/2018
Fun story! Mini rant incoming:

UGH. "How could you know what it's like to lose someone?"

Well, excuuuuse me, Scott; I forgot that you are the only person on earth, nay the universe, to EVER lose someone. No one could possible understand or sympathize. *hard eye roll* This is one of the reasons why you're not very well liked, Scott!

Haha, the "no one understands" trope can be very unlikable in a character for me. Although, it is something that tends to be a trait in X-Men characters and is not your fault, haha.

Great story so far! And I like the Peter's server identity wasn't immediately revealed like in some stories.
BlazeStryker chapter 37 . 4/22/2018
I know I'm late to the whole "Ben's Girl" thing, but Amara seems the best pick. Danielle can be kind of odd romantically speaking, likely from the way her power hooks her into the base instincts of those around her. Rachel always came off as conflicted to the point of asexuality when she ran with Excalibur. And that leaves Amara.
Axcel chapter 22 . 2/8/2018
It’s a shame Peter never realized that if he killed certain supervillains things like this wouldn’t happen. Or at least use his genius to lobotomize them or similarly passify them.
Axcel chapter 12 . 2/7/2018
Surprised Scott isn’t being his usual super douche self and blaming normal humans for the actions of the FOH while ignoring that said normal humans hate the murderers, too? Yeah, it is kinda sad that I’m surprised, too. Scott isn’t exactly stable or reasonable or particularly good-natured.
Axcel chapter 10 . 2/7/2018
From what I recall, Spider-Man actually has a decently effective healing factor. Enough that bruised muscles and cracked ribs heal overnight and shallow cuts and abrasions heal in minutes.
Axcel chapter 6 . 2/7/2018
There? The school is in New York City. They should be saying “here”.
Axcel chapter 1 . 2/7/2018
The student and gun thing isn’t new or more common. It’s simply that the media reports shoots more often now.
YokaiAngel chapter 47 . 11/17/2017
superb!
multyfangirl21 chapter 47 . 5/26/2016
I've managed to do a shallow but wide kind of series of a marvel and DC crossover but its so hectic that I don't think I'll ever get around to typing it up and posting it. You've managed to do a great story that might be worthy of joining the official marvel universe , I don't know for sure since its defentally not up to me but I'd say that one day you should give it a try and send it in to them.
multyfangirl21 chapter 42 . 5/26/2016
Yeah! Laura's in this now :) I love the father daughter pair that she and Logan make even when they're not sure of each other they always are part of each other the way that family is
multyfangirl21 chapter 38 . 5/25/2016
Crud well that got messy for that group.
multyfangirl21 chapter 35 . 5/25/2016
squeal of fangirl delight! Ben's going to be working with his brother and not have to hide that their brothers and the team gets to meet him :)
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