Reviews for The Mention That I Miss
thefieldsofelysium chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
**** that made me cry. beautifully written story. good work. :)
Morgan Stuart chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
In response to ibagoalie's question: This story was first published in Delta Quadrant 7 by ORION Press in June 1998. It's also been posted to .creative. Thanks for your review!
ibagoalie chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Did this story appear in a Strange New Worlds book? It sounds awfully familar. In any event, it was very well written.
JadziaKathryn chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Aww, that's a sweet ending. At first I had no idea what was going on with "Mother," but it all came together wonderfully, and you've handled the children well. The fact that they want to go back to being as they were, despite knowing it will kill them, is a very realistic touch in this setting, and resonates because of how you had Janeway and Paris miss that complete knowledge. Beautiful story.