Reviews for Birthday Present
supersteffy chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
"...blushed so deeply he invented a new shade of red.": I love that line!

And yes, Seto Kaiba in work clothes is VERY hot! Great story! Happy birthday, Seto, indeed!
AbstractNightmare chapter 1 . 6/30/2009


Honestly, my mouth was agape for a good. . . 10 minutes. That was. . . quite good. I don't know how I'm going to get the blush off my face, but this story was good. God Yami is a pervert.

Phoenix51 chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
That was HOT! Please say you have a continuation to this!
vampslyr chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
Oh so HOT! And very well done. I know this is two years old, so I do hope you've gone on to writing full lemons, I'm certain they'll be just as beautiful, but never underestimate the power of the lime. I'll go look for some more of your work in just a moment. Hopefully if you've graduated to full lemons you've found someplace that will let you post them like AFFN or mediaminder. Love the story and the comentary was cute.
le'racio chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
that's got 2 be the funniest and greatest thing i've read in months! good job. take it from me, im not easyly impressed but good job.
Kailyssia Pym chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
I absolutely love this fic. It is now one of my favorites. It is so gard to find this pairing. This fic was very well written and believable. Woderfully written and very deserving of a sequel. Please do a sequel. Please please please please please plaese please please please please.
pinwheel926 chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Oh man, that was great!

You dont know how many times I squeeled and laughed!

Awesome job!
OneFlareshipperOfMany chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
Ah, I've struggled to find a non-sucky yugioh fanfiction, prefferably flareshipping... and finally, my digging has rewarded me!

Ah, very nicely written and funny. The camera thing was a great idea... Too bad NC-17 fics are a thing of the past, I'd love to read more of this... **coughs** But that's the pervert in me speaking, I'm sure.

As I said, I really like this. There were just a couple parts that seemed a bit iffy to me, characterwise (and thats only because I've grown FAR too critical, I think) but other then that it was fantastic.

Thank you very much for a well written fanfiction, and I hope to see more! _
ShaynainShambles chapter 1 . 4/22/2005 that was...different. Um... I liked it... okay please write another lemon for the rest of this fics. thankies!
Mistress of Muses chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
That kicked ass, rocked socks, or whatever else you want to say. I liked the lines about 'not with homemade porn' and the blush inventing a new shade of red. That fic made me laugh... very nice. _
Amarin Rose chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
(3) You can NOT tell me the thought of Seto Kaiba in workman clothes is not sexy! You can't!

But Seto Kaiba in *no* clothes is even sexier. :)
Red Dragon of Egypt chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
RD*is currently on fire do to the intense story she just red LITERALLY*um jewel u mind lending me a hand

Blue Dragon/jewel:sure *sends a waterfall to cool her cousin down

RD:thnks anyways keep up the GREAT WORK Vega if u do ill be forever happy so PLS UPDATE thnks bye

Jewel:yes this was a good story had me boiling as much as it had RD scorching pls keep up the great work

Ninja Froggy chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Whoo! *Explodes* That was great... short... but great! You should continue with the great-ness! Meep! :)
pockyprincess103 chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Oh my frigging God that was great. I don't know if its just the fact that all of the fan fics i've read until now were cheezy but WOW! You actually had me giggling throughout the whole thing.(I'm usually a very serios person when it comes to any kind of literature) You're a great writer. Keep it up!
PlatinumAngel25 chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
great fanfic. best one ever! i'd recommend it to all the hentai people out there to read it.
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