Reviews for Expose
sirtechlocke chapter 4 . 2/1/2008
Simple, succint, and done. Done well at that.
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 5/9/2007
Writing is much better! hee hee. Nicely written. Good job, here Shannon. Keep on writing!
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 5/9/2007
Way to go, Jim! Guy just finds out he is Immortal and baseball is waay more important! hee hee :)
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 5/9/2007
Hi Shannon, You forgot to mention or didn't know that another reason you don't tell a pre- Immortal is that they actually can die from natural causes like disease or old age and not become Immortal. I do not know whether poison would would trigger Immortality or not. This phenomenon is dealt with in The End Game movie and a couple of episodes. Nick Wolf is from The Raven? And Amanda killed him? I never did like her.

Well written and highly interesting story.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
Oops Bad idea Chief! Just stay and deal with it!
La Llorona chapter 4 . 4/26/2006
Don't supposed you could make it 3 in a row?
Village-Mystic chapter 3 . 5/26/2004
I like the idea of immortals and friend longuing and watching a game when a newbie comes by. So far, so good on the characterization. If you get a chance, I believe it is Sandburg and not "berg".
immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 2 . 5/19/2004
This is a really good little series you have going here. You have really blended HL, HL:tR, and The Sentinal really well and I liek your explanation as to why Blair is Jim's Guide.