Reviews for Uzumaki Brothers
Guest chapter 5 . 3/16/2014
i tried reading this, you seriously need to space out your work. it looks horrible
Lol chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Celena Black chapter 6 . 6/1/2013
So because a reviewer said that janus seemed too perfect, after only 5 chapters you mad3 him cry in this one? My advise if you struggle with characterisation have an outline for as many characters you can begin with the main ones, their personalities but most importantly their development. How they react to different scenarios, how they are affected by changes as the plot develops, successes and failures. So don't just react to one reviewer, know your characters and the journey you want to take them on and who will they turn out to be on the other side. Good luck. Xx
Nide chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
oh... so you ended the story... well the last chaper was really stupid... and random
shadowfan999 chapter 19 . 8/20/2008
that was awesome please keep up the good work and continue.
Tannim Murphy chapter 19 . 1/21/2007
Aw, c'mon, 19 chapters in little over a month then nothing for two years? Boo! This story was pretty cool! And I am especially curious as to why this mirror town is in existance, and why Tsunade thought it'd be a good idea to have Janus run away.
dave97 chapter 11 . 11/12/2005
good story so far as ive read, but you really need to work on your spelling i'm find the wrong spelling for words everywhere. Again , pver all it is an excelent story, if you want someone to look at it for spelling, or any other story you are writing i would be more then willing to do it for you.
DualX chapter 17 . 6/20/2005
I like ur story but make more spce plz
Giffy McWonderkin chapter 19 . 5/11/2005
Hey great story. Aside from some grammar and spelling errors here and there thise fic isn't all that bad. Though the twinn village is kinda disturbing.

Anyway could you please continue the fic.
ColdCypher chapter 19 . 4/11/2005
Well... that's a somewhat disturbing and kinda annoying twist in the story. I can see why you stopped writing there... Oh well... still it was really good, up till the point they arrived in the copy village... :D:P:) Loved it :)
reighost chapter 19 . 3/9/2005
hello? did you die or something? how long is it gona take to update?
Master Chaos chapter 17 . 6/13/2004
Hey great story. a really good plot. I always did like self insertions, they really increase the storyline and how interesting it is. I have to say this is a superb story. keep up the good work man. hope to see the next chapter up soon. ...and congrats on your girlfriend Temari-chan _ . well anyway great story . see ya Janus and Temari sitting in a tree K-i-s-s-i-n-g ::chuckles:: bye
Dtxlife chapter 17 . 6/12/2004
Interesting story. I like how you made it completely one person's POV. Keep at it.
Max Knight chapter 17 . 6/12/2004
Oh My God ! This is an unexpected twist.

I like how it's up the work and Update.I wanna see what happens next.
animewatcher chapter 16 . 6/10/2004
nice chapter again, wow janus stole oochimaru's sword? somebody must be furious now, i wonder what would happen to janus in the future, worse now that he is a target for itachi too... anyway, i hope there i more action in thext chapters
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