Reviews for Trinity
karonkgb chapter 15 . 8/13/2013
Wonder Woman and Batman stand alone as three dimensional personalities that can act together and provide energy, richness and drama to any story they are in. Leaps of the stage at your roaring with pulse and drive.

Superman has a crisis of what what must be sacrificed to be The Man of Tomorrow. This dark might of the soul makes him a victim, too much so Batman battering Clark to deliver his 4 points are razor blades. I thought Batman was going to exterminate Kal as a threat to mankind.

As a reader I am urging you to keep on writing.

P. S. After several attempts I managed to locate the TRINITY script.
karonkgb chapter 2 . 8/12/2013
She merely shrugged, sinking back into her seat and folding her arms. Gotham was a malicious ocean of steel and glass, cutting into the polluted sky like a thousand knives.

Gritty description.
Jim1esquire chapter 15 . 11/12/2012
Excellent story, I really like your dark interpretation of the meeting of these three iconic heroes, and i wuld like to read more regarding this story, my e-mail is jim1esquire googlemail,com
darknightrises chapter 14 . 10/12/2012
man i wish you'd complete this story... this is as good as it gets
Rated R Superstar23 chapter 15 . 7/16/2011
I will never understand why u let such a beautiful Project go. It makes more sence than the actual dc versions. Hell u could sell this Idea or make it published and then comic cartoon and realtime movie this. Consumers would eat this up it already have a nolan touch on it. Actually it would fit right behind the up coming dark knight movie this is perfect.
Rated R Superstar23 chapter 15 . 7/16/2011
I will never understand why u let such a beautiful Project go. It makes more sence than the actual dc versions. Hell u could sell this Idea or make it published and then comic cartoon and realtime movie this. Consumers would eat this up it already have a nolan touch on it. Actually it would fit right behind the up coming dark knight movie this is perfect.
mfmxxx chapter 14 . 6/7/2011
I'm iffy on this. Clark is a pussy in this, plain and simple, and his storyline is terrible. I thought you were going for the remodeled version of Clark from "Earth One" Comic that recently came out, like a more confused Clark about his place in the world, but he is terrible.

Bruce is too quick on the uptake, he's sharp, but Diana and Clark always confused him.

Diana, being on Lex's arm?... Nuff said...
Morality0duality chapter 13 . 2/5/2011
Well damn. This is incredibly well written and ironic and dark very very dark and I would like to see it conclusion. I find it fascianting how they all ended up as they did. So clark had an accident with his heat vision activating huh nad it traumatized him. Diana's all gung ho and running all false information and in unbearable arrogance doesn't see it or realize it. Bruce just brutalized one of the most innocent and kind man in existence and fed him to the sharks by accident by leaving him vulnerable to Bruce. Bruce somehow didn't see the Clark not a killer and did not deserve a beating or what he would got if he owned up to the biological malfunction that was as controllable as nocturnal emissions or wetting the bed but with far graver ramifications. I like your story and would like to continue it. It is good and ironic really.
Morality0duality chapter 9 . 2/5/2011
Why did clark freeze in hypertime he should have had hours.
Morality0duality chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
Perfect one two three TIMBER to Clark.
Miravisu chapter 14 . 11/20/2009
To people wanting to read this story in its screenplay state, try googling for: simply scripts trinity alex mckinnon

..and you should find a pdf file listed as one of the first search results!

As for the difference between this version and the screenplay. Well, both had their pros and cons. Diana was probably a bit too mentally hardened in the ff version (although still with that naivity of hers, but mostly due to being experieneced with the human world), yet she seemed almost a bit too soft in the ss version. So I'm not sure which version I prefer. Oh, and her set to prevent a certain someone, and then turning out she had a hand in creating him...

Great writing!
WonWoman Diana chapter 13 . 7/26/2009
ok its realy sad that after all the time and the review you got that you never updatet this great story.

maybe just maybe the muse of writing will kiss you again and you will continue this...and bring this nice story to an end.

greetings Diana
anonymousfog chapter 14 . 1/20/2008
Interesting story!
IVIaedhros chapter 12 . 9/13/2007
zomgstillnoupdatefinishpleese /annoy
IVIaedhros chapter 14 . 5/30/2007
Holy...I...this is frickin' awesome. Only E Kelly has achieved the mastery of Batman's portrayal that you have and your ability to create plot and action is unmatched. This is an absolutely AMAZING piece of work and I'm ashamed that it has received so little attention.
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