Reviews for Dad! I mean, Wyatt's dad!
PaulW.VinD.BradP.NickC.ChrisH chapter 9 . 5/18/2016
Honestly, I wouldn't say this was a "favorite" for multiple reason, but it is a good story. My reasoning is as follows. Chris has been nothing but strategic in the way that he manipulates the sisters and Leo throughout the show except for that Mr. Right issue and when he was so focused on Wyatt that he almost missed his own conception date. But even then, his personality remained the same. It is this that makes me think that the way you have Chris behaving-getting wasted and letting the truth slip-as well as his overreactions emotionally speaking do not fall in line with his character on the show. Almost everything Chris does on the show has been a stepping stone for him to get something be wants; I doubt he would go on a binge and pretty much just a whiny tantrum just because his family was finding out that he was in fact family. Like I said though, it is a good story if read in its own context but if read in the context of a fan fiction-which usually makes you think that the characters will just be IN-characterit fails (in my opinion).
PaulW.VinD.BradP.NickC.ChrisH chapter 2 . 5/18/2016
Honestly I agree about season 6 having arguably the worst plot. I think so more because, as you said, they had an amazing idea but seemed to just let it go. There's Wyatt at the freaking source of all evil, good, and anything in between yet you show him what once? And even then you show him only fighting against Chris and Bianca in the attic, but where's all that Twice Blessed firepower? Bianca was impaled when she died; Wyatt didn't do anything big it huge that we hadn't seen before. Also he's the ruler of everything; he had to have know Chris went to the part and he had the spell so I really think he would have come after himself especially after bianca failed. Yet the writers let that go as well. The reactions were below standard because we waited so long for everyone to find out her when they all did the writers just let that go too. I mean there were barely Any episodes between Piper finding out and Chris' death; they could have at least given us fluff or that famous Halliwell temper in an argument between mom and son; I mean Piper was horrid to the guy before she knew he was her son and then she finds out and he just calls her mom and accepts it? Bull, i would've been making her feel as bad as she made him feel. Sorry for the long vent/ rant
brendafay chapter 9 . 3/28/2015
more please
StardustOwl chapter 9 . 12/31/2013
Like the story, I really enjoyed reading it
heather.atw chapter 4 . 7/7/2013
"It's just you." said all three of them. Lmao poor Paige I imagine her reaction to that! And omg yes finally a story i can relate to because iI always thought that if Chris had told them he was Leo and pipers son they would have thought he was wyatt not another child lol
Statiic97 chapter 9 . 9/23/2012
sorry about the name been awhile since used this
Statiic97 chapter 9 . 9/23/2012
Y did u stop writing? i mean i get the writer's block but 8 years! this is a really good story almost perfect except for the whole chris drunk thing i can give u some ideas if that will help i have a million ideas and nothing to type with! get what i mean?
Linda chapter 9 . 6/14/2011
great job loooovvvveeeddddddd ittttttttttttt :)
My Alternate Reality chapter 6 . 5/18/2011
I was waiting for someone to guess that Chris was Paige's son. Too funny that it was Piper. I hope you come back to this story, I am dying to see Piper talk with Chris.
evil sasuke girl chapter 9 . 4/5/2009
OMG!

THAT WAS SO FREAKING FUNNY!

LOVE L0VE LOVE LOVE THE STORY!

HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!
faith bonksie chapter 9 . 2/28/2009
cool

please update soon i cant wait to find out chriss reaction when he realises he spilled the beans
Jazmingirl chapter 9 . 1/14/2009
i love your story please if you can update
chalicity chapter 9 . 11/19/2008
haha! i love the way you wrote everyone's reactions - much better than canon. kudos to you! -
xxxxx456 chapter 9 . 8/13/2008
love it!

i'd love chris to have a sister or someone come from the future or pheobe or paige's kids.

any way please please please update soon !
goldacharmed chapter 9 . 6/11/2008
i didn't think that was bad a t all, in fact i really liked it. i thought it was a really funny way for piper to find out. i love new ways of his secret being reveled. this was so far a really cute story. i cant wait till the next update. good luck with your finals. later dude
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