Reviews for A Shadowed Path
Ou Yang Jing chapter 1 . 2/24/2005
*sniff* holy freakin' crap! That has got to be the saddest thing I have ever read! *sniff* good job *sob* keep it up...*sob*
Kowanna chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Congratulation!
it's great and I finished it with tears (am I to sensitive?)
So I stop there because I'm french and my English may be not very correct _
congratulation again!
otaku-no-miko chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Wow. Just...woah. I don't get to read very many Tasuki deathfics, mainly because everyone concentrates on Chichiri. This was well-written, and very thought-[rovoking.
I have just one thing I'd like to point out-IO remember reaeding a timeline somewhere that stated Chichiri died at the age 70 and Tasuki at age 84. Although I appreciate the fact you made them older, could you research the ages a bit? Please and thank you.
Other than that small nit-picky fact, this was wwell-written, there were little to no spelling or grammatical errors (or if there were, I didn't see them), and your paragraphing is awesome. *thumbs up* Awesome one-shot!
~otaku~