Reviews for Wonderland of My Own Making
Rahuran chapter 15 . 8/25/2008
Very well written. I like the theme used in this fiction especially, because it connects well with the G.U. series that came out long after this was written; particularly about the players being the ones to change the game, and not an AI.
Kyara313 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Sugoy! One of may favorites in .hack section!

Very good!
Sightbent chapter 15 . 6/9/2008
This story was incredible and very touching. The Kenji and Akira scene were very nice, they were just so fluffy (in a very good way).

This story really showed off your talent (which is amazing by the way) as a writter. The way you descride many of the scenes made me feel like I was right there, you paint a great picture with your writing. Your story structure and flow where good as well.

Thank you for writing this story, because I really enjoyed reading it.
Sightbent chapter 5 . 6/9/2008
It's so hard to find a good .hack/ fanfic (especially one that isn't abandoned or incomplete), but I've been pleasently surprised so far with this one.
TheGreatAnimeFan chapter 15 . 4/28/2008
Amazing story it was an awesome read.
Kintora chapter 15 . 3/14/2008
The story as a whole definitely did not disappoint me. I've read some of your other stories, and I'm quite impressed. :) You're a brilliant writer, and I hope you keep writing awesome stories.

Ps. I loved the internal connections you made between characters. None of the relationships or plot events were too over the top. For a piece of fan fiction, it sure turned out very realistic. Sweet job!
brolly501 chapter 15 . 1/3/2008
RyougaZell chapter 15 . 2/24/2006
Great fic. It was very well done.

I understand you wrote this before we knew Mireille was Mistral's daughter and that Shuugo and Rena were Kazu and Akira's old neighbors (Rena had a crush on Kazu).

FrequencyQueen chapter 15 . 8/14/2005
Cute story! Too bad some people go nuts when they get a little power. Is there going to be a sequel with an explanation of the star & light flash?
SenkaiNinja is not logged in chapter 15 . 8/6/2005
Amazing! It kept me riveted and everyone was IC! The baby should have been called Kite!
All Things Cold chapter 15 . 7/31/2005
Wow, what a great story. I read half of this yesterday, and only put it down when I felt tired. Great story! You did a wonderful job advancing the characer's personalities - I felt like Kite was still Kite, but it was a Kite that benefited from being more experienced, etc. The characters really grew up beliavebly, and I love that they were still recognizale yet more advanced. I also found it interesting that Bith turned out - well, the way he did. I wouldn't have thought of C.C. Corp giving him a job like that. :)
Twilight Memories chapter 15 . 3/9/2005
Beautiful. Just beautiful! what an awsome/wonderful/touching story!

You dont find very many AWASME fanfics about future stuff with the .hackers but oh well! This one IS !

In otherwords, I LOVED THIS STORY! _
Steeple333 chapter 15 . 1/29/2005
Wonderful. I can't give you higher praise.
Steeple333 chapter 5 . 1/29/2005
Actually, Mistral's baby was a girl named Mirei, who plays as Mireille in /Legend of the Twilight Bracelet, also known as /Udeden.

But I like Sasuke too, and you preobably didn't know at the time of typing this. _
Steeple333 chapter 4 . 1/29/2005
Fourteen hours... so they're on the Wesy Coast? I like to think Japan, not as fourteen hours ahead, but one day forward and 7hours back. D
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