Reviews for Show me Heaven
katherinespices93 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Wow, well, I don't know what happened to you but I really really hope that you are ok. You write beautifully and this is the best story I have found in ff about my new otp. I know that it's been ten years and you have probably grown up, but I so wish you came around one day and continued this amazing story. Be safe,
one-shot-at-life chapter 11 . 4/12/2014
I really wish you'd update this story soon, it's really good. I really like the fact that you've taken the original story of peter pan and put your own spin on it.

Please update soon.
one-shot-at-life chapter 12 . 9/11/2013
i know it has been ages since you last updated but im begging you to keep going. I really like where this story was headed and hate that you've just left it at the good part!

Please update. Even if its only a short chapter i keep rereading this series because i like it so much!
MissBlueSunglasses chapter 13 . 7/9/2013
Aww! I love it! It's been so long since you've updated- seven years. I couldn't stop reading this today; even when I had to finish my summer homework. Ha! I wonder what's going to happen. How is Wendy keeping Peter from aging? Is it her stories? Her "innocent" presence? What is Jaz doing watching her? What happened to Tink? Will everything go back to normal? Please update. :)
one-shot-at-life chapter 13 . 6/2/2013
This is such an amazing story! you have to keep writing it i really like where your going with the characters, i think its very clever :)

Please keep writing i can't wait to read the next installment :)
milktea5 chapter 13 . 1/22/2013
wow! no update. i don't know why i read this, even though i have a feeling it was not updated.
Alexis chapter 13 . 11/26/2012
It has been 8 years since you touched this story. I'm crying because I fell in love with it and 8 years and probably never. Your writing is beautiful okay. Come back
Deathcomessoon chapter 13 . 1/13/2012
I just wanted to say that this story is spectacular and, though you haven't in apparently in quite a while, I really wish you would update it.

Not many have the writing skill that you possess, and it is such a shame to see such a promising story left unfinished.
Wuchen chapter 13 . 3/24/2011
This is a very beautiful fanfic, and I know updates would seem unlikely in the near future, and even though it irks me to see good fanfics left in the dust . ... it's probably is still one of the best fanfics I've ever read. There's this sort of emotion that can be felt reading this, and your writing and creativity is excellent. So carry on whatever in life you are. But if you are reading this...your fans are still out there! w
mel chapter 13 . 10/24/2010
What happens next?

ryddlemenyx chapter 13 . 10/20/2009
alright so its been about 5 and a half years since the last update but update anyway. I love the plot and the entire story, and jaz is adorable id you ask me. So Update please!
Sarah chapter 13 . 4/20/2008
Is chapter 14 going to be up anytime soon? I hope it will be... the last time you updated was four years ago! :O Update soon, please! :)
SilkenPetal chapter 2 . 3/7/2008
Update...NOW! I want to see what happens, I must see what happens. YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! YOU CAN'T WRITE SOMETHING SO GOOD AND THEN LEAVE IT!
jgsparks chapter 13 . 3/2/2008
I love it! Please update soon!
shleprock chapter 13 . 1/15/2008
ooh! good story so far keep going please!
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