Reviews for The SunnyDale Immortal
Bobboky chapter 8 . 2/22/2006
unconventional Xander married to unconventional Faith... Who knows what strange (and maybe "unconventional") things they might cause to happen... probably kinky too
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 8 . 5/3/2005
THIS IS A GREAT STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE.
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 8 . 1/20/2005
THIS STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER.
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 7 . 1/20/2005
THIS IS A GREAT STORY SO PLEASE FINISH SOON.
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 6 . 1/20/2005
LOVE THIS STORY.
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 5 . 1/20/2005
GREAT CHAPTER.
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 4 . 1/20/2005
NICE WORK ON THIS STORY.
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 3 . 1/20/2005
GREAT WORK .
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 2 . 1/20/2005
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER.
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
REALY GREAT STORY.
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 8 . 12/15/2004
THIS IS A REALY GREAT STORY TO READ I CANT WAIT TILL IT IS FINISHED.
dogbertcarroll chapter 8 . 12/9/2004
Uber Xander can be fun but you've taken

a lot of the fun out of it. Dru is always

a fun character to add in for tension, but we

need something more.
dogbertcarroll chapter 2 . 12/9/2004
A bit cheesy.
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
You need to separate the dialog into sections

so we know who is talking. As is it all tends to

run together. Xander would hardly split without

quite a bit of proof. You need some scenes

involving Death explaining things in detail and

showing proof of what's going on.

All in all I have to admit I liked it.
TheDeadWalk chapter 8 . 9/20/2004
Love the plot and the pairing. Trouble just seems to follow Xander everywhere. Dawn needs to mellow out though. Please continue.
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