|Reviews for The SunnyDale Immortal|
| turbomagnus chapter 5 . 3/16
Jonas Simbaca? Interesting; would that be a faint nod to the cartoon "ExoSquad"?
| Bobboky chapter 8 . 2/22/2006
unconventional Xander married to unconventional Faith... Who knows what strange (and maybe "unconventional") things they might cause to happen... probably kinky too
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 8 . 5/3/2005
THIS IS A GREAT STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE.
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 8 . 1/20/2005
THIS STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER.
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 7 . 1/20/2005
THIS IS A GREAT STORY SO PLEASE FINISH SOON.
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 6 . 1/20/2005
LOVE THIS STORY.
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 5 . 1/20/2005
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 4 . 1/20/2005
NICE WORK ON THIS STORY.
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 3 . 1/20/2005
GREAT WORK .
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 2 . 1/20/2005
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER.
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
REALY GREAT STORY.
| SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 8 . 12/15/2004
THIS IS A REALY GREAT STORY TO READ I CANT WAIT TILL IT IS FINISHED.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 8 . 12/9/2004
Uber Xander can be fun but you've taken
a lot of the fun out of it. Dru is always
a fun character to add in for tension, but we
need something more.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 2 . 12/9/2004
A bit cheesy.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
You need to separate the dialog into sections
so we know who is talking. As is it all tends to
run together. Xander would hardly split without
quite a bit of proof. You need some scenes
involving Death explaining things in detail and
showing proof of what's going on.
All in all I have to admit I liked it.