Reviews for Harry Potter and the Millennium Items
Fi Suki Saki chapter 20 . 9/13/2013
Too bad this fic is not continue...

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Awww...! I'm curious what will happen next!

There's so many thing i wanted to say before... But, i forgot almost all of them..! #peace

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Anyway.. Great fic! ;)

This fic so focus about Bakura and Ryou...!
Not that i complaint...
Nazu-San chapter 20 . 8/9/2013
Update, update, update, or I'll set my yami on you! Kidding she'd kill you, back to the point,please tell me you haven't died and that you're going to continue this story ! You have to I really like it, it can't end, update!
Nazuki(Yami Nazu)- ... Ignore her she's just very disappointed that the story ended at chapter 20
Nazu-Yes you must update and you write really good...;)...UUUUPPPDDAAATTTEEEEEE!';)_
Strange chapter 8 . 7/29/2012
Your characters are very OCC. I can't believed we're seeing the same characters here. They were like kids submitting themselves to a powerful stranger. These guys don't remind me of anything of Yugi/Bakura except for some rare moments that are quickly address and forgotten. The King of Games and one of his strongest rivals easily submit to an old mans will? Even if its Dumbledore,I feel nothing that reminds me of the Yugioh characters. Though I have to gave you points for not making the Yugioh character overshadowing the Harry Potter cast. Sadly you did the opposite and made them a bunch of annoying kids,who are supposed to one of the strongest and most capable tactical mind in the you age regress them to 10-13,the story would be a lot more believable than it's now.
Mari Roza chapter 20 . 7/8/2012
don't tell me its over this story was a bit choppy at first but now i'm starting to really like it plz don't end it who cares if its been over 6 years you must update
pretty plz?
A Neverending Dream of Flight chapter 20 . 12/31/2011
I'm assuming you've dropped this, seeing as how it's been 7 years since you've updated? That's a shame, since it's one of my favorite HPYGO crossovers I've read. It's really well-written, and while there are similarities to other fics they're few enough that it's clear they were at least mostly unintentional and certain scenes were inspired by other authors.

I like the idea of Ryou being possessed by Zorc, that's an interesting twist I haven't seen in any fic I've read so far. It seems like Malik might play a larger role in this later on, if you ever decide to continue. I can imagine him being needed to translate the heiroglyphs or because he knows some secret or something like that. Harry being possessed by Voldemort is a nice idea too, and I like how you've introduced it. Everything seems to be tying together little by little.

Overall, you have good pacing; not too fast nor too slow. I do feel as if certain scenes have been left out, though, such as when Malfoy found out about Bakura. You didn't address what happened after he walked in on them, and all of a sudden he and Malik are acting less hostile towards one another. I'm assuming you were going to add that in later, but as for now it's confusing and choppy.

Anyway, great job and keep up the good work. I don't have much hope for you continuing this fic, but just in case you do I shall add it to my favorites and alerts.
Hex the Magician chapter 20 . 8/19/2011
I love your story. Please update soon!
Fujimori Chikary chapter 20 . 7/13/2010
I Cnt Believe U Stoppd Updating! And It Was So Gd Too *SniffleSniffleTear* It Rly Ish Too Bad. Bt If Ur Going To Stop, Culd U Atleast Put "Discontinued" On The Summary Thing? It Wuld Be Much Easier Tht Way
Lady Solaris chapter 20 . 6/2/2010
You have written such a good story why stop writing it? I know its been years but please continue it.
lisha chapter 20 . 7/27/2009
please write more of this story i would like to read what happens next
subaru1999 chapter 20 . 6/13/2009
great story, hope you continue it someday!
evangeline the dark vampire chapter 20 . 4/16/2009
poor Harry. Now it is more exciting. I want to know the you going to update this story?
Lone warrior of egypt chapter 20 . 4/7/2009
love your story please update
Rose-Oracle chapter 13 . 3/25/2009
The little remarks about the priests and temples are funny. "Priests of the temple of 'Kick-your-ass', Malfoy." XD I can actually see Malik saying something like that.
Olaf74 chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
Wolf-girl-Artemis chapter 20 . 8/7/2008
*sighs* i hope you are not one of those who stop writing their story's, because you havent updated in 4 years. does almost everbody stop writing on a cliffhanger. please update, and if not, give the story to someone else (not me please) so they can finish it. but overall, it is a great story,(it needs more action, only a little) and i hope you complete it someday!
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