Reviews for Sway
Guest chapter 6 . 2/5
Guest chapter 4 . 2/5
I'm sorry, but by the first day in the manor I would have started planning Draco's murder.
real talk chapter 7 . 11/16/2013
What the bloody hell? This makes little sense. How is she in love with him? You are going too fast. If she had to love someone I would think it be Blaise. Is it because he is black? I mean I was confused when she kissed him before the baby incident...but to love him now. I think you are too young to understand the meaning on "love". So unrealistic and a waste of time.
Taylor chapter 5 . 2/15/2013
It would be better if Draco forced instead of Hermione making the move.
janjan2009 chapter 9 . 8/15/2011
oh wow!
janjan2009 chapter 8 . 8/15/2011
im not sure how to feel after that lol
janjan2009 chapter 5 . 8/15/2011
janjan2009 chapter 4 . 8/15/2011
very intense chapter
janjan2009 chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
janjan2009 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
:)...I'm interested to see how this turns out...
md chapter 10 . 5/16/2011
hermionies desicion decision disgusts me at the end. She shows herself as a selfish bitch. Harry must have gone through hell and she chooses guy who had broken her soul. Shes a bloody idiot and i wished she had died at the end. That would have been a better ending. Apart from that great story
Sook03 chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
Hit list is 6.02x1023 foot long by now.
Sook03 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Silly pure blood.
whiteuniform chapter 13 . 11/27/2010
i quite confused with your story. apparently you strayed from your previous plot-this, i presume. You started out very good falling hopelessly flat to the near end. You were inconsistent with your flashbacks and your character line ran astray. The chapters apparently lost it's connectivity with each other that's why it lacks focus. to be completely honest, I've been having a dilemma whether to completely detail my comments/critics/opinions about your story but dim it unnecessary so since i've been also in your shoes before.

Be careful next time and remember what i've pointed out. Overall, the story was good, very good in deed, just PLEASE be careful with your connectivity, consistency, and character line, don't do too much of details or literalistic description,

hotttopicgirl chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Love it
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