| Reviews for Jedi Harris |
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   vmage2 chapter 3 . 9/18 I am pretty sure the main spoken language of Star Wars is Basic and the written language is Aurabesh. |
| Marvelmyra chapter 3 . 7/5 The care and PREPARATION of a Jedi. I think most males can propagate just fine without instructions. the Kama Sutra not with standing ( I mean who could even manage all that weirdness ? ) |
| Marvelmyra chapter 1 . 7/5 Why would becoming a Jedi, Not a Master mind you but an ordinary force sensitive be a problem for him.? After all Xan-man does live in top of a Hellmouth ! This can be a help right.? |
| Prince Chrom chapter 21 . 5/11 If you have John Constantine in this universe Death would be both female and up to date on slang. |
| ohnanana chapter 1 . 4/16 Good start |
| SonOfNenji chapter 25 . 7/6/2016 If that lightsaber ends up destroying W&H from the inside I'm going to laugh. -N |
| SonOfNenji chapter 23 . 7/5/2016 Wow... Those wraiths, man... R.I.P. -N |
| SonOfNenji chapter 22 . 7/2/2016 Dark Xander is a Force ghost! Cool! -N |
| SonOfNenji chapter 19 . 6/28/2016 You remember "Meh"? Well, it ain't so Meh now... -N |
| SonOfNenji chapter 18 . 6/28/2016 Meh. -N |
| Umbra.Venator chapter 28 . 5/22/2016 awesome story :) |
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/26/2015 Wait, what? The Librarian from Discworld was once a human from our world named Tom Murray? |
| LoganAlexander chapter 7 . 6/12/2015 you really need to stop using the binary bullshit ideology concerning the force. it jas literally become idiot ball which prevents xander from affecting canon and in turn making it easier for you to copy a story instead of writing your own. not to mention that the whole black and white view of the force makes no sense. |
| LoganAlexander chapter 5 . 6/12/2015 so the angsty weak jedi thinks about the balance of angelus/angel but doesnt stop to think about th3 unbalance and frankly sith like action of ripping a soul out of heaven/afterlife and sticking it inside a body thr soul has to share with a vampire demon. |
| Anna the Lynx chapter 9 . 6/1/2015 About your gem choices: this chapter has inspired me to give you an impromptu gemology lecture, as it's a hobby of mine and it's been bugging me. Beryl (emeralds are a specific green variety of this) is significantly softer than corundum (gem-quality red is ruby, every other color is sapphire). Corundum in turn is softer than diamond, which also comes in a variety of colors. Spinel is often mistaken for corundum, as it has a similar hardness and is often red or blue. If you consider emeralds (and thus, other beryls) tough enough for use in lightsabers, then your color and gem choices are less limited than this chapter seems to imply. (Please take this as a compliment, if I didn't like your writing, then I wouldn't bother telling you stuff) |