Reviews for Mother Amazon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep it up. This is a great story. So please keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this. I hope to see more, but since it has been forever since last update I doubt I will. The one thing that bugged me is that Shampoo was never better then Ranma in canon. Yet in this story it is taken for granted that she it |
![]() ![]() You need to make more! I am begging you they are so well made that I want more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, nice story. To bad its very dead since its been five years since updating it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() KEEP GOIN' KEEP GOIN! THIS IS AWESOME. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay this is turning into a pretty interesting story... I have to say that this version of Kasumi came as a bit of a surprise as well, and thank you, it's given me an idea how to handle a particular problem for a story of mine. Keep up the good work! :) Ridgewolfe |
![]() ![]() I've been meaning to ask, how old is Shampoo in this fic and when are you going to update this story again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame the story's dead Be nice to see where it led Your museāhas it fled - |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! Please put new chapters soon! (Have you discontinued it! 'Cause its a great book! But its been more then a year so...) Please make more soon! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this was definitely an entertaining read. I hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm awfully conflicted about this story. The premise is a compelling one, but the execution leaves me scratching my head. It's pretty schizophrenic in terms of tone and characterization, with moods and personalities shifting at the drop of a hat. It's also fairly melodramatic, you know? A bit of a crisis-fest. And what's with Ukyo's secret declaration of revenge? It doesn't even really make sense. Nor does the fact that Akane still hasn't apologized to Ranma. (I feel like that whole thing was done mostly to push Ranma towards Kasumi, anyway.) I dunno, I have trouble taking this story seriously when I don't really believe the characters. I think this one just isn't quite for me. Oh well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that last seane almost brings a tear to your eye yet again you have proover what a great auther you are plz update soon |
![]() ![]() giving tips for services in japan is considered rude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A nice start, and with a premise I have not read yet :) It'll be interesting to follow a mother-daughter dynamic between Shampoo and Ranma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! Great story. Can't wait for more. |