|Reviews for Pomegranate|
| Duesal10 chapter 16 . 1/12
This was beautiful. Thank you for writing this.
| Duesal10 chapter 15 . 1/12
Well I am STUNNED. You have a gift, truly.
| Duesal10 chapter 14 . 1/12
Oh wow. I love how you've let this all unfold.
| ChrissyKat chapter 16 . 8/20/2013
This is still, hands down one of my favorite Troy stories. Every now and than I come back to read it and it always manages to pull me in.
| neverland300690 chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
This is one of the most amazing stories i have ever read. I love both of your portrayals of the characters, especially how you managed to keep them so tru to themselves, their flaws (and you developed Briseis very nicely, so that she'd get to have flaws and be her own person with her own adventures to tell) and lovelier sides. I loved how you Achilles was fierce and how he could also be gentle without coming away from his warrior nature. It fit really well. I adored that part about him and Briseis talking about power and all the power he coudl give her. It sounded so much like something a fighter like him would say and it really did it for me.
And the leggent of persephone, the way you used that here... that was just,... wow. even if you'd kept this as a one shot it would be wonderful, but im ever so glad that you did not. I enjoyed every moment of this story (oh, i almost forgot, the dream Briseis had about Achilles had me really mushy for a moment, i was so touched by her pain and by the acuteness with whish she felt her loss at the last moment, when seh was uncontious)
| Beloved Daughter chapter 16 . 3/7/2013
Really cool story! I love how you integrated the Iliad and the Aenid. Thanks for writing and posting! :)
| xXNeverEndingFireXx chapter 16 . 9/13/2012
I liked this BrisAchill is awesome specially the smexy warrior.
| Alyssa chapter 16 . 1/10/2012
I just reread this story, I love it that much. You have a way with words, it truly is a talent. I really hope that you will continue to write fanfiction because it would be a shame not to share your stories with others. :)
| Mrs. Mojo Risin chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
You're an incredible writer and this is one of the best Troy stories I've ever read.
| GypsyWitchBaby chapter 16 . 4/28/2011
such a beautiful, wonderfully written story. loved reading it!
| simply amazing chapter 16 . 4/20/2011
I know you wrote this over five years ago and it was one of the best if not they best alteration events of Homer work that I have read . I loved it and you would make an excellent author one day :)
| UglyTruth chapter 16 . 4/2/2011
Unbelievably good. Catchy, true to the characters, tragic and exciting and spotted with bloodshed but this love story is truly worth reading. Thank you for posting this.
| punz chapter 16 . 1/19/2011
This was a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Now, I must go and watch Troy again.
| friggers chapter 3 . 12/16/2010
Oh, I'm starting to like this better than the movie - the Briseis/Achilles interaction.
| friggers chapter 2 . 12/16/2010
I like your writing.