Reviews for Unleashing the Flea
GrandCommander13 chapter 1 . 1/24/2001
Looks good. Spelling error though (I tell you because it's usually hard to find and fix). Look in the paragraph about "We found a metal deposit you couldn't match on Core Prime." I doubt they found it a few moths ago :-) But anyway, I like the story. Could use more descriptive action (and just plain more action), but it's just the first chapter. Keep up the good work!