Reviews for The Untold Story
David chapter 5 . 8/25/2004
Excellent story Karania. Please Update Soon!
Katie Legends chapter 5 . 8/21/2004
Great chapter...is Aurora gonna get any more dragon-types? Just curious...write more soon!
jadesshadow chapter 5 . 8/20/2004
Great update soon.

She Wolf Demon
kamitori chapter 4 . 7/27/2004
Why couldn't it be a Trapinch or a Flygon at least?
Katie Legends chapter 4 . 6/6/2004
Thanx for reviewing my stories. Sorry if I hadn't got a chance to read any of yours. This a great story and I'll continue to read it when you write more!
ST Pika chapter 4 . 6/6/2004
That's good, she made a intelligent and informed choice. Hope it helps her out when she gets to those first two gyms.
ST Pika chapter 3 . 6/6/2004
Nice intro to Edward's character and Siu Ling's character, look forward to seeing what happens when they meet Aurora.
ST Pika chapter 2 . 6/6/2004
Good start, Aurora getting a dragon pokemon is certainly different then what most stories give their starters when they leave on their pokemon journeys. Look forward to reading more...
Mal J chapter 4 . 5/31/2004
Continue.
Shippo chapter 4 . 5/28/2004
make the chapters longer and make more chapters
Yukimi the Ice Goddess chapter 4 . 5/28/2004
You should make your chappies longer. It's good writing, but too short.

Update soon!_
RainbowSerenity chapter 4 . 5/28/2004
Hooray, she got Tropius! I wonder what adventures will await our hero...bwahaha.

*-RainbowSerenity-*
jadesshadow chapter 4 . 5/28/2004
Hey great story I cant wait until the next chap comes up.

She Wolf Demon
David chapter 4 . 5/28/2004
CHapter 4 was a very cool very soon.

#1 Fan David.
GeminiRyoko chapter 3 . 5/28/2004
hey, I think its pretty good so far, keep it up... :-)
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