Reviews for Fatal Occurence revised edition
a fan chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
this was a really cute story! i love mushy happy endings!
Sparky chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
It is cool. Darkwing rocks with woman he loves. There should be more stories like yours. Way a go!
Trouble chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
This is very well done. You manage to capture the characters. I could *hear* Gos, LP, and Morganna in my head. Great job!
It feels like an episode. I hope you keep writing these. If I could make one request, make them longer, with more meat in them! You seem to have the talent of capturing these characters, so it would be a great read!
EMarie55Plus chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Great story! _ I was pretty worried about DW, too. *chuckles* I'd just LOVE to see a picture of "Nega-Pudding"! :D
GreenLeoFiend chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Nice little engagement scene.
-Stef :)
Brad Eugene Palmer aka Nightw2 aka Comickook chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Aw. Thanks for writing the revised addition of such a good story. Everything I loved about the original is still in here and I love the added lines and scenes. THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!