This was a good story, and you have a definite talent, but there were some fatal flaws: too many story threads, switching between them too often, and trying to give them all the same amount of attention. It would have been better to give most of your attention to just one story thread whilst giving brief, condensed glimpses into what's going on elsewhere at infrequent intervals - or at the least, having three parts Harry to every one part of something else. That way you would have had a focus. The way you've written this, it's like you're trying to look everywhere at once. It's all written well, but it's too hard to keep track of the path of the story.

Update! Now! Please!

I offer to you anything I can do to help get this story back from the ether. Seriously, I got time enough for idea bouncing, beta-ing, proofs, being a one person chorus of sycophants; name it, I'm in.

Both this story, and its prequel, were really cool. I love the mythology, the characters, and everything else. From the dates, it doesn't look like you're going to continue, but I really liked what I read. I look forward o reading your other stories as well!

Great read with an interesting plot, just hope you get back to writing this as its a good tale with plenty going on. PPMS!

Hmmm interesting..

what are the angels for and what will happen to nutari/harry

I am really enjoying the story. Wish you could come back to write the rest. sounds like you had it planned out..

I know you haven't updated in forever,

but I love your story and wish you

would continue it.

i really do enjoy reading you stories even when they get confusing at times. its a shame you probably dont write them anymore but o well you have a life to live and things to do :)

wow i really love this! i love how the whole god of death and sirus thing since his animagius is the grim, it's perfect. i really love sirius and zylle thingy ;) oh and i was wondering if night would have a relationship ;D I FEEL LIKEEE an oc would work perfectly. i always thought it was night and a goddess or something but im not sure. and im wondering on the harbringer ranks! i know darius (sp?) is the most powerful but what are the ranks of the others such at of course night, etc. anyways thanks, great story, update soon! ;D

When are you going to update this story? It's been almost 5 years!

These stories are great. I don't see why you have stopped, but I wish you wouldn't

I know you're hard at work on the Elemental series, and I'm looking forward to the result. I was just wondering, there's a lot of Wizarding World bashing, a lot of which is earned, but much of which isn't. The main views among Elementals appears to be that Wizards are bigots and small-minded, but in saying that, it makes the Elementals hypocrites guilty of that same crime. Obviously much of the Wizarding world needs to get it together (Draco, death eaters, Fudge, Percy, etc, etc) but there are just as many who would be more than willing to work with the Elementals if they knew everything that was going on, at least on the mortal plane (Sirius, the Order, Hermione, the Weasleys, Dumbledore, etc, etc). And to accuse the Wizards of being small-minded and unaccepting of other magicks seems wrong, considering that most Wizards, if not all, aren't aware that other magicks exist. Especially since it's the Elementals that decided to hide away from the Wizards in the first place. I don't mean to be harsh or anything, especially since I love the Elemental series and it's on my favorites list, I just want to point out that this story is very biased, unrealistically so, in favor of the Elementals. There's always 2 sides to a story, and I think we're only seeing one side. Especially considering that we all know that Sirius and the Order and those people only want what's best for Harry, and only want to try to help him. That doesn't justify what's effectively kidnapping, but considering what I know of the characters, I doubt that any Elementals would've allowed Sirius to talk to his godson otherwise. And why is Harry so resistant to the idea he might be Harry Potter? Yes, it was obnoxious for them to just take him without so much as a by your leave, but he knows he's a wizard and he doesn't remember what happened before he ended up at Grey Tower, so is it really such a challenge to at least find out what the Wizards had to say? Personally, I feel like he's being a real brat about the whole thing by not at least staying open-minded to the fact that he might be Harry Potter. Just because he's Harry Potter doesn't mean he can't also be Nuitari Hawking, and yes he's an Elemental that belongs at Grey Tower, but he's also a Wizard that belongs in the Wizarding world (I have a theory that Hogwarts reacts badly to Elementals because they seem to be concentrated in Slytherin, so Pheta cursed it that way in revenge. Am I right?) There's no reason he can't be both. And just as a suggestion, I would really love a scene where Hermione tells the Elementals off for being hypocrites. I just think that would be awesome. I would also love for Sirius to end up with Zylle, but that's me being an idealistic romantic :)So yeah. Again, I'm looking forward to the final result of the Elemental series.

love this story please update soon

you should update!