I really enjoyed your story! You're a very gifted writer and "plotter." The plot was so original, as you hoped. I love how you brought Lily back and fleshed out her personality so satisfyingly. She was even more intellectual than Hermione, quite a feat, but you made it believable. I was very sad she had to leave at the end, but it made sense. And of course, reading this years after the canon series was completed, it's so refreshing not to have to worry about Horcruxes or Hallows or camping for a satisfactory outcome! Thank you for sharing your creation with us.

Thank you for writing such an interesting and unusual tale! I know it's been many years since you finished it, but I have enjoyed reading it nonetheless!

Wonderful story. I love good endings! Thank you.

Just finished the Story and I loved it. It's always interesting what others imagine to be possible with magic and everyone was very in Character in my opinion.
All in all very unique and refreshing to read.

love this unique story

Such a good read

Original, well written, great story. Gratitude to the author for writing and sharing this, I hope she is having a splendid tea with Lily and Blaise.

Original, well written, great story. Gratitude to the author for writing and sharing this, I hope she is having a splendid tea with Lily and Blaise.

loved it. well done. a very different story!

This was a different premise, however I found this story surprisingly pleasing. I kinda feel bad for Snape but a least he got closer. Draco on the other hand made me laugh with his dramatics.

I’m sorry to be just discovering this now. So original and well-written.

What a great piece of writing. My only objection is I think you did Ron a bit dirty, got a bit Ron-bashy for a hot minute.

Excellent portrayal of the characters and their reactions. This piece is the most convincing I've read as to what would make many of the Slytherins take a side. Thank you so much for writing and I hope you are still writing today!

I haven't read a fanfic on this site in ages because AO3 is just better in most ways, but your fic was the exception!

This story was lovely and I'm so thankful that you wrote it.

Fantastic story, really enjoyed it. Imaginative AU, of course, but truly amazing how you fleshed out Snape, Lily, Hermione, Blaise, and the Malfoys. Harry left a bit to be desired, but I think that was necessary given Lily’s age.

Thanks!

My goodness, the Malfoys stayed so firmly in character this chapter. Not one genuinely empathetic impulse between them. The consistency made me laugh though.

I liked this story and I like this ending. It was definitely a very interesting premise. I do think I would read a sequel involving an extremely slow burn romance for a certain two characters that takes genuinely a decade or two to develop XD. I'll have to check your stories for any such a sequel.

Either way, very interesting premise, well executed, and thank you so much for sharing your work.