Very fun read!

I like this version of Lily Evans. I Liked The motive of Tom Riddle Jr destroying Magical society as revenge. I also like that you made Snape a pureblood.

Hahaha. I love it! I’m usually find Dumbledore’s manipulations a huge turn-off (though often necessary to the plot, and it is canon after all), but I love the thought that he’s setting up Snape and Hermione in a long-con as part of a happy ending. Lovely story- the ending felt very appropriate- sad but uplifting. Loved it.

Hello, I can't speak English, so only uncle Google. I was very pleased with this short story, the theme, course and conclusion were absolutely brilliant. Thanks a lot ! For Severus, Hermione and Lily 3

Bloody brilliant!

Love The Mummy reference.

I’m hooked.

Thank you so much for the fascinating, well balanced and wery nicely told story!
It was a pleasure 3

l actually agree with Snape's read of Hermione's situation and his view of her utter foolishness and hubris .. he's cruel perhaps, but he's not wrong. not one whit wrong.. I should rather have an honest review than foppish but empty words that could only lead to doom and gloom and a dead end alleyway. and to think, for the vaunted brightest witch of her age, the idiot cannot even focus in the truth of his words, only the delivery and the deliverer. when Harry complained about Snape being insufferable and a torment, this is the same shirty little hypocrite who lectured him on proper forms of address and what not.. the more i read the Hermione Granger portrayed in this tale, the more i see into the mind of the girl who took credit that never belonged to her in the first place, and the worst kind of idiot to exist, the pseudo intellectual hypocrite .

This has been a very fun read. I don't think I have ever run across this style of plot line before. You certainly added twists I didn't see coming. Thanks for sharing.

Your Hermmione trily embodies the worst trait of canon Hermione, making Harry's choice for him.

I really enjoyed your story! You're a very gifted writer and "plotter." The plot was so original, as you hoped. I love how you brought Lily back and fleshed out her personality so satisfyingly. She was even more intellectual than Hermione, quite a feat, but you made it believable. I was very sad she had to leave at the end, but it made sense. And of course, reading this years after the canon series was completed, it's so refreshing not to have to worry about Horcruxes or Hallows or camping for a satisfactory outcome! Thank you for sharing your creation with us.

Thank you for writing such an interesting and unusual tale! I know it's been many years since you finished it, but I have enjoyed reading it nonetheless!

Wonderful story. I love good endings! Thank you.

Just finished the Story and I loved it. It's always interesting what others imagine to be possible with magic and everyone was very in Character in my opinion.
All in all very unique and refreshing to read.