|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Unexpected Arrival|
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
A few times in this chapter you wrote 'caption' where I think you meant 'captain'. Other than that, great chapter!
| Me chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Here comes critisim "Well it looks like him to me!" Screamed tonks. Tonks isn't a small child, why is she screaming? Also, she is an auror, she would know about impostors, as would the rest of the order. I read half the first chapter and it is so terribly written that I can't bring myself to read more
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Very good idea and very good story! But... why James and Lily didnt know anything about Harrys life? In 7th book, in forest, they know (you was so brave...).
| Marauders Fan 16 chapter 14 . 5/17/2012
sorry but ARE YOU MAD? HARRY SHOULD LOVE HIS FATHER PLEASE TELL ME HE LEARNS TO LOVE HIS FATHER OR I WILL NOT READ ON HIS MOTHER OF COURSE HE LOVES BUT WHY NOT HIS FATHER? so sorry i am really annoyed please let me know if he loves his father or i wont read on good bye!
| Saffarinda chapter 19 . 4/10/2012
Plz hurry up on yr writing.
| Linoria chapter 19 . 10/27/2011
I'd like to see where this is going:)
| Ginevra 'Ginny Gin' Weasley chapter 4 . 9/24/2011
Sorry but I just remembered you can't spell quidditch or captain. It's not c.a.p.t.i.o.n it's c.a.p.t.a.i.n and also its not q.u.i.t.t.i.t.c.h it's q.u.i.d.d.i. . it annoys me when people spell words that come up in the books so often wrong. I mean who doesn't know how to spell quidditch
| Ginevra 'Ginny Gin' Weasley chapter 3 . 9/24/2011
| ninniiii chapter 5 . 9/23/2011
Its very well written! Could be in a little bit more detail ) but still, good reading entertainment! Thanks a mil!
| Omg chapter 19 . 3/11/2011
Oh my lord! You have to update, write seaquel. DO SOMETHING. DON'T LEAVE US IN THE DARK!
| s chapter 7 . 3/11/2011
this is a horrible story. It sucks! Haa... Bet you fell for that. This was pretty good. I'm hoping for some death eater attacks and times of extreme worry about harry. I may sound weird and cruel, but I love stories where Harry is hurt or sick and every one is worried and blah, blah, you get my point. Those can be real tear jerkers if written right, and I love a good tear jerker. Bye!
| HOLA chapter 4 . 3/11/2011
IT'S NOT MOM, IT'S MUM. whoah. forgot to turn off caps lock.
| hmm chapter 3 . 3/11/2011
Harry was a little to trusting. He's realy excited, but wow, they were a little over enthusiastic. Try to put less exclamation marks in. They end most of the speaking lines.
| Katie Bowen chapter 4 . 9/8/2010
It's Herbology, not Herbiology, and the author of
The Standard Book of Spells is Miranda Goshawk,
not Miranda Grishhawk.
| wildwriterrr chapter 19 . 12/7/2009
o please keep writing this is really good!