Reviews for Forever Fighting
Roshawn chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
cute story
xEmeraldStarx chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
XD lol
forever and three more seconds chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
LOL! I loved that! and there aren't enough SS/RL/SB fics out there.

Ruth )
Katalara chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
::laughing:: coolness. loved it!

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KaiPhoenix chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
aw, the power a pregnant person has...and the pull of chocolate
My3scape chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
lol
articuno13 chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
never trhought i'd see a ff like this!

i love it!
Kamp chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
cute. very cute.
bamkam chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
aw! so cute!
StudioGothique chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Aw...that was bloody cute. Hope you do another one.
Vampire Angel of Death chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
the only thing I can say is :LAMO
iamtherealmaverick chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Hehe, tres cute!
hipa chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
Nyt on ihan pakko kysyä; oletko suomalainen?

Oon nimittäin pähkäilly tota jo jonkin aikaa...

If you understood my question, I hope I will get answer,

if you didnt understand it; just forget...

Anyway, good story (once again). Little differend than your other stories (or atleast those which I have read are differend), but in no way worser.

It was fun to read; and happy... :),

which is important (to me!) after two overly sad stories...

those tags are quite nice, because this could be quite hard to read without them.
Katsuogaara666 chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
that was... intresting... a little strange, but intresting.
Mei Zhen chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
OMG OMG OMG *SQUE*!

LMFAO! XD I was laughing at almost EVERY LINE of this! LOL! I couldn't stop laughing! LMAO!

THUD

LMFAO! HAHAHAHA! Sirius fainting and Snape remaining all cool was so good. Different points of view. LOL. I'd love more stories like this one, with my fave characters together (SS/SB/RL) and not one of them missing... LOL!

Absolutely great and definately going to favorites. :) And now for the most useful part of the review:

Apart from the greatness and tone of humor... I'd also like to comment on the style. The fact that you write it as the 'play' sort lets us imagine the scene quicker and with the remarks being made a second after the previous one. There is no need for long descriptions because it would ruin the speed of the humor. (I usually like descriptions- just not too long- but here I think it would have most likelt ruined it. Not because I think they would have been bad, but because it would give the reader the impression that there is more time between the remarks the chars make to each other. :)

(I could say description is only for smut, but my best friend would slap me! LOL!) j/k ;)

Grammar and punctuation is perfect.

I loved all of it. :)

(OMG! I write the Bible instead of a review... I really should stop talking now even if words can't describe how much I loved this and it made me laugh out loud- I love humor and it absolutely is my fav genre.)
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