NO! HOW DARE YOU HURT LUIGI! HE BETTER NOT DIE YOU EVIL LUIGI KILLING PERSON! *takes out piece of the Master Emerald* MAWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Knuckles: HEY! What are you doing with that?

Me: *whistles inocently* what? oh, nothing...

Knuckles: *glares*

Me: Please Knuckles! The meanie author beat up Luigi! *starts crying* hes all burned and clawed and-and- *cries harder* I JUST WANNA KILL HER! *cries* IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK?

Knuckles: yes. now GIVE ME THAT! *grabs the emerald* besides I can tell your fake crying.

Me: *thinks* oh, hes good. *says* well anyway update soon plz! AND MARIO YOU BETTER SAVE YOUR BROTHER OR ILL PAINT YOUR OVERALLS AND HAT...PINK! (with permanent paint!) MAWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ok so update soon bye bye! ;-D

This is one of the best fics that I read, I just have one question... WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE IT!

Cool! awsome story. cant believe it took me 2 days to read all 26 chapters. well i hope E 123 doesed kill Luigi, or else i would probaby *cough* kill you with a 50 foot razor sharp knife with spikes and covered in acid that could burn through flesh *cough* i mean...um...whatever. well plz update AS SOON as christmas is over. Oh and if Knuckles gets hurt ill also kill u. so update soon! ;-D

So is Bowser like a decented of the Giga-Bowser or something? Anyway good chapter.

nice...nice

I prefer that you don't add the Freedom Fighters, mainly because I'm not into the cartoons or comics

nice...nice

I prefer that you don't add the Freedom Fighters, mainly because I'm not into the cartoons or comics

LOL! Poor Wario...actually, now that I think about it, not really. Anyway, keep up the great work!

A bit off topic, but did you notice that in Paper Mario: The Thousand Year Door, the Crystal Stars share a large amount of similarity with the Chaos Emeralds? There's 7 of each, they're the exact same colors, they're powerful gems that in the wrong hands could lead to mass destruction...you get the idea.

Haha! This was the funniest chapter yet! And I say you should put in the freedom fighters, but becareful with Sally, I mean then you have to choose either Amy or Sally right? Also add the other Mario villians! And is this being set after Paper Mario 2?

Okay, first of all, Digimon was the FIRST!

Second, interesting chapter. Clever that you have Wario being stuck with the sweet-sweet Cream.

Third, remember, if you write a chapter of the FFs, send it to me first so I can check it...please?

Fourth, let me make another summary, but short one of the FFs.

Sally Acorn- With Sonic, they're best friends, but Sonic just LOVES to get on Sally's nerves.

Sally: Where were you? You were suppose to help us with the mill generators!

Sonic: What about yesterday?

Sally: What about it?

Sonic: Didn't I help yesterday?

Sally: No.

Sonic: No?

Sally: Is there an echo?

Sonic: Well well about the day before yesterday?

Sally: SONIC!

With Tails, she's like an aunt to her.

Sally: Alright, Tails, just take out Robotnik's generators and we can enter to his fortress.

Tails: Will do, Aunt Sally. I can easily take Eggman's toys, no problem.

Sally: Oh and one more thing...

Tails: What...?

Sally: Did you wash-um hands and brushes your teeth-ies?

Tails: (blushes) Aunt Saly! You're imbrassing me!

Sally: (giggles)

Bunnie Rabbot is Sally's best friend, and Tails also sees her as an aunt, but not as much as he does with Sally.

Bunnie: Come on, sugah, tell meh y'all hurt.

Tails: I'm fine, Aunt Bunnie. I just fought a little EggBot. No big deal.

Bunnie: Uh-huh... (Carefully touches Tails' shoulder.)

Tails: OW!

Bunnie: Yup...y'all can't fool ol Bunnie heah, sugah. Better hop ya over to the meds.

Antoine has a crush on Sally, which gets him and Sonic in fuming fights, But Sonic does make fun of him sometimes.

Antonie: Ohh, my prinzess. You're looking beautiful in ze night.

Sally: (Groan) Antoine, would you please-?

(Sonic speeds by, purposely making Antoine spin. Sonic stops by him.)

Sonic: Ant, Ant, Ant...you're looking a little green...actually you look better green. You should keep it.

Antoine: (Feels better) You fuelish hedgehog! You zhink ze fuel, that is you, mock moi, such as myself?

Sonic: Oh no, how could I-ANT, LOOK, A BADNIK!

Antoine: (Screams as he jumped fifthteen feet up a tree.)

Sonic: My mistake, it was only Knuckles.

Knuckles: HEY!

Cool, you added Emerl! Is Cream's pet Gemerl going to appear?

plus you made it interesting evenmore with the three monsters that destroyed things with chaos emeralds.

Ps. Why is Omega saying, and why is he in Eggman's base?

Giga Bowser AND Perfect Chaos? Jeez!

And what about that site I derected you to? Planet Freedom? I know the epidsoes are small and a little blurry, but that's all I got.

I vote for them, but I bet any other readers will disagree.

I'll try to point out there personality, but do try to go to that site I showed ya. It's the only one I know.

Princess Sally Acorn (Squriell or Chipmunk. I'm not sure)- A royal member of the Acorn family. Her stategic knowledge, calm nerves, and strong heart is the eesential key to the Freedom Fighters' victory. To Tails, she's like an aunt, which she always treats him a little like a young child. To Sonic, she's his best bud, which he sometimes annoys with his arrogants and crazy decisions. Yet, through all their bickers, its like they're flirting. She's always true to her friends, never letting them down. Why, even if a loved one died, she would always wait for him. (Just like in the Sonic comics when Sonic 'died' for a year.)

Bunnie Rabbot- A sweet southern girl at heart with a cute southern accent. In most situations, she's always upbeat and perky. But she's sometimes very sensitive about her robotic parts, which she yearns for her body back. Never the less, they had been extrememly handy in her adventures, which includes super strength only in her robot arm, and strecthy legs.

Rotor 'Boomer' Walrus- A handy mechanic next to Tails. His inventer know-how has always helped the team. He's quite modest and never likes to stand himself out. He kind of pigs out sometimes, especially with eating fish, but you always find him in his workshop. He's a good friend of Sonic, hanging out like best buds.

Antoine D Collete (Coyote)- A so-called royal guard, a French guy with a French accent. He's always a man of honor, but his cowardiness ruins it. His knees shakes in the slightest scardiness things. He's a bit stuck up, and has a bit of an ego. He has a crush on Sally but hates Sonic because he sees him as a opponent for her heart. He only TRIES to be brave when he wants to impress Sally, but his scardy ways always get the better of him. In the comics, Antonie toughened up when Bunnie edmitted her feelings to him. His weapon is a sword.

Dulcy the Dragon- Nearly the last of the dragons, and the Freedom Fighters' air-transport. The problem is that she can't land, and when she gets dizzy after that, she always mumble something about her mom like: 'I didn't do it, mom.' or 'Ah...I'm home, mom!'; use your imagination. She's a bit of a ditz, always spacing out, but she's a lovible girl, for a big dragon. Although she can NEVER keep a secret or tell a lie. You can't blame her, because dragons can't tell lies, its an old legend. She can also sniff out lies. She can breathe out fire, of course. In the cartoons, she can also breathe out a gust of find or freeze things.

That's all I can think of, but try to watch the shows on Planet Freedom to get better insights.

Hey you Said something about the comics/ cartoon charectors. keep up the good work!

Hmm...I wonder this friend who had the same problem was Bunnie Sonic was refering to. Well Sonic curing the Yoshi lost all the drama, but it seems your using the Fleetway/game version of robotization.

But if you read my Sonic fic: Sonic AU: the Reign of Chaos, Bunnie is robotizied in a Fleetway-version, but like Shortfuse, the armor is instructible and not even Sonic can bust it up; sides he hurt her organic body if he tried.

I suggest you read the Fleetway comics for insperation. You can find them at

I see you did used my little story with the stars and emeralds. I was afriad you'll use my exact words for they are...well...not good. Glad to help, but wouldn't it kill you to name them Star Emeralds? It rolls on the tongue quite easily.

more more more! this fanfic is getting good!

Here's something I thought up about the stars and the emeralds.

The two worlds known to man, each of them are tied by two powerful forces grouped in seven. Each with the ability to drive a world to its kness or bring the world to harmony.

Star Spirits/Star Pieces, the living source of sheer magic, guarding the fabled Star Haven/Star Road. Each with the power to grant wishes. Each of these beings can never be used by the forces of evil. They are the yin that can bring salvation to the world.

The Chaos Emeralds, mysterious crystalized rocks, fused with chaotic power. Each has incredible power mostly used for destruction. Good nor evil, does the emeralds judge. They are the yang that can bring damnation to te world.

Weird, but hey...