You know...Knuckles needs a TV or something. Even a Yoshi could trick him by saying just one word.

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Yoshi: Yoshi!

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Knuckles: I don't know what you just said, but you've convinced me enough.

I'm likin' this story! It's better then the one AnT is working on, BUT HASN'T UPDATED!

It would seem, from what I heard, that Giga Bowser was not Bowser, but a artifical creation by the Master Hands. I'm not sure.

"Requesting specimen to shut up." (lol)

That was rich. As quickly as you're updating, these short chapters are getting annoying.

And don't you mean DOCTOR Ivo Robotnik? What the heck does he want with a bunch of frog tongued dinosaurs anywise?

Aw, stop chewing your nails, I ain't mad. In fact I'm flattered that you're using referance from my fic. But if you really want to make it up then just make the chapters a bit longer (Not AnT longer cause...trust me, you DON'T want to do that just yet.)

Hey My Favorite Dummy.

The ending was rather hilarious, as was some of the diolouge. Speaking of diolouge, I think maybe some vocal adjectives could be put to good use here. This field always gets dangerous, because you don't want to upset the flow of the story and make it all choppy and whatnot. I appreciate the ricocheting nature of the speaking but some little inserts about how they're saying what they're saying would be most appriciated. (Cuz you know how I am with my beloved adjectives. . . they're the best part of the sentence.) I think if you stick in some scenic background and a couple talking tags, this would be one tubular story. See ya later stupid.

Joey this is a great story so far and i can't wait for the next couple chapters

Hmm...have you been peaking in my story, cause this one seems to follow my format. Oh well.
I'm confused...how could Mobius and Mushroom World be in the same world...unless it's like a seperate barrier dimensions, like in Sonic Anime Movie where Robotnik said that Planet Freedom is made up of two seperate dimensions...so...
This story needs some tune up but it has some potential. Keep up. Remember, Sonic Battle takes place after Sonic Heroes...at least I think. Be ready for Paper Mario 2...why can't they ever make a Mario RPG 2?

Hola hermano bruto! (I'm related, I can say that.) I never thought I'd live to see the day where my wimpy little brother would join me in the world of aspiring authors. This was most exceedingly unexpected but the talent you exploited was none the less inspiring. And as far as I can see, you haven't made any stoopid spelling errors yet (that was intentional, for the truly moronic.) Of course, I have an IQ smaller than my shoe size so I guess my proof reading skills are not all that abounding. But hey, I think it rocks anyway, reguardless of the mental capacity it requires. Ha ha, I'm just kidding, tell your fellow Mario nerds to stop throwing things at me.
**Waits**
Stop smirking and tell them.
**Waits Some More**
Tell them already!
**Mario's super fire balls of doom come hurtling out of no where displaying insane accuracy and speed**
Oh crap. Totally not cool.
**Falls over and dies**
Excellent.