Reviews for Vermin? You sure?
Cyrusderdach chapter 17 . 8/22/2014
Are you ever going to finish this? :( I really like it...
central chapter 17 . 1/13/2013
FINISH!
Jarrtail chapter 17 . 10/30/2008
Wodehed's going to get them all killed. As usual. Update soon!

-Jarrtail
LittlePsychoWolf chapter 4 . 4/2/2007
AUGH! NO! Where did the spacing go? Chapter 2 was good! What happened? PLEASE remember, as this seriously kind of interferes with understanding the story. EVERY TIME A NEW CHARACTER SPEAKS, PRESS THE LITTLE RETURN KEY! You don't need to put the paragraph break line or anything. Just that ONE...LITTLE...KEY! other than that, good story, like the rest of your stuff. But please, to make this easier to read, use my suggestion. (If you have a legitimate reason, please PM me. I'm sorry if I've offended you. This is by no means a flame, just an idea! All your works, especially "Once Upon a Midnight Dreary" and that one (forgot title) where Dingeye and Thura...walk in on...something...*blink blink* are amazing! (Not empty flattery- I mean it!)
LittlePsychoWolf chapter 3 . 4/2/2007
Ah, there we go! There's the spacing! Uh oh... Tagg's pretty mad...
LittlePsychoWolf chapter 2 . 4/2/2007
I've never actually read Welkin Weasels, although it does sound interesting. Unfortunately, my library system doesn't know it exists, and that blasted won't let me preview them. Your little prologue helped, though, and this seems interesting. Just one little tip: When new characters speak, it's helpful for readers if you start a new line. For example: The last paragraph is *almost* a paragraph of doom.

This: "Not one pawstep closer, mates," Tagg said in a menacingly low voice, brandishing the battleaxe."Oi!" one weasel with a patchy coat said. "That's our meal, we's caught 't fair 'n' square!"Tagg snarled, his tattoos rippling, making his face look quite barbaric. "And he's also my friend. Back off!""You can't be friends with a beast of burden. . . can you?" One weasel spoke, hesitantly."Beast of burden?" cried the otter. "He's an intelligent being! He's no slave!""Been too long alone, I'd say, chief," whispered the scruffy-looking weasel into the marked one's ear."I heard that remark, vermin," snarled Tagg."I apologize," the marked weasel said calmly. "We did not know that the mouse belonged to you." The otter's eyes widened. "He's owned by nobeast, save himself, perhaps. I'm no slaver."The scruffy-looking weasel glanced at him, as if to say he thought that Tagg was insane.

Might want to be turned into this:

"Not one pawstep closer, mates," Tagg said in a menacingly low voice, brandishing the battleaxe.

"Oi!" one weasel with a patchy coat said. "That's our meal, we's caught 't fair 'n' square!"

Tagg snarled, his tattoos rippling, making his face look quite barbaric. "And he's also my friend. Back off!"

"You can't be friends with a beast of burden. . . can you?" One weasel spoke, hesitantly."Beast of burden?" cried the otter. "He's an intelligent being! He's no slave!"

"Been too long alone, I'd say, chief," whispered the scruffy-looking weasel into the marked one's ear."I heard that remark, vermin," snarled Tagg.

"I apologize," the marked weasel said calmly. "We did not know that the mouse belonged to you." The otter's eyes widened. "He's owned by nobeast, save himself, perhaps. I'm no slaver."

The scruffy-looking weasel glanced at him, as if to say he thought that Tagg was insane.
Daughter of Horus chapter 17 . 3/29/2007
Wow, evil cliffhanger...continue soon!
Elwing-Evenstar chapter 17 . 3/11/2006
GREAT story! This is really cool! You've managed to capture the essences of both worlds perfectly! Awesome stuff - can't wait for more! D
Sahrah Marmlade-Leonhart chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
Well, you reviewed my story. But I'm too lazy too e-mail, so I'll use reviews. Here's a hint- GO TO HELL! If it brakes the rules, the readers'll suffer, not me. so, I say this... IF YOURE GONNA READ SO YOU CAN RIDICULE, THEN STOP WASTING MY TIME, YOU B*! ((sticks out toungue because she's incredibly imature.))
Talek Darkbrook chapter 16 . 11/5/2004
Nice story. Welkin Weasels are among my favourite books, nice to see a Redwall crossover and great way to make it happen there. I particularly enjoy the reactions to Nimbalo as a talking mouse.
DeathInSimplicity chapter 10 . 10/30/2004
Well, this is as far as I'm going to get right now so figured I may as well review now. (oh an' btw, jus' letting you know, chapter four is missing and 5 is up twice )

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Have ta say you done a pretty good job expanding upon Beboots original an' its interesting to see the whole equalibrium of the universe thing at play. Wonder if anything happens to the weasels...

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Well, good job on making this pretty open to anyone who wants to read it (I've never actually read the other book, so you know you've done a fairly decent job at the least) and the only detractions could be a bit of the pacing on it, otherwise you've good a nice story goin'.

~avlblu
luxraisin chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
yay for this...
luxraisin chapter 13 . 9/28/2004
cool crossover...
Kamaitachi chapter 13 . 6/13/2004
This is a great crossover!
Yuoofox chapter 12 . 6/2/2004
This is a very good crossover.
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