|Reviews for Cruel time|
| Linnath chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Hmm, so short? Shame one you! You have a very nice, expand it!
| Nymredil72 chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
This was lovely, although I prefer your other works. (just me, though.) Have you read any ancient Roman poetry? This poetry reminds me of... er... (can't remember the name properly!) I think it was either Callinus or Catullus (I always get them confused.) He wrote something like:
My woman says there is no one she would rather marry than me
Not Jupiter himself, if he asked her
But what a woman says to a hungry lover
You might as well scribble in wind and swift water.
Hm... I dunno why, so don't ask...
Oh! I suddenly remembered what this really reminded me of! *claps* Their's a poem by Sappho that goes like this:
Although they are
The words I speak
The brevity definitely gave this poem impact, and goes well with your theme of how lives are so brief in the spanning of Time.
| Jazmin3 Firewing chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Nice. Short, sweet, and it makes you think.
| Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
You were right. The berevity DOES give the poem more impact, especially since you speak about the cruelty of time. This is very true, and very good. I like this poem...you're a good poet.
| UniCornVampire3z chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
so tru so tru...
| starspike chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
This is really good...it's short but everything you wrote is so true, it really makes you think. Nice job.
| Selesterile chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
Very nice and very true