|Reviews for Visitor|
| Modern Kassandra chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
I LUV ur story. I think that you capture the star crossed lovers well. I especially liked the ending, when the parting is so sweet in its bitterness. If you ever red this, PLZ continue your story
| jacksgirl793 chapter 2 . 4/11/2008
really good keep writing!
| Elda Aranel chapter 2 . 11/5/2006
oh come on? can't this one go on a little more? this is too captive to let alone. write more!
| Mia Liz chapter 2 . 7/3/2006
This is great finally a a/b fic that doesn't just re tell the movie! you should totally continue this I really want to see the reations to everyone.
| jean chapter 2 . 4/13/2006
| Serenity-James chapter 2 . 2/18/2006
i loved it all and hated none of it and i do wish that u would update so i could read lots more
| ChrissyKat chapter 2 . 1/29/2006
This was a good story and I hope you havent decided not to write anymore of it.
| SupernaturalGal6 chapter 2 . 8/10/2005
| aCharmedOne chapter 2 . 8/7/2005
Why did you stop writing this story?
It was so beautiful and sad all at once. I would have loved to know how you pland to let it go on.
Maybe you would reconsider writing it again.
| Amanda chapter 2 . 7/23/2005
I love your storyy it rocks! I just watched the movie Troy yesterday and became hooked on the couple that is Achilles and Briesis. Ans like I said before go you! your story rules...looking foward to more chapters...(hopefully a certain someone won't die...)
| jean chapter 2 . 7/12/2005
| heidifrancoskywalker chapter 2 . 6/25/2005
please update soon! please! it's awsome!
| Masochism chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
| Charlotte chapter 2 . 3/2/2005
Fabulous story. The dialogue was interesting as well as the descriptions of their emotions and body language. I wish you would write more.
| Amanda chapter 2 . 2/13/2005
I liked your story, honestly who wouldnt want to jump brad pitts bones! please write another chapter (maybe achillies shouldnt die)